YES! It's a flippin' miracle! I'm alive!

Okay, outburst aside, I've been meaning to read this, and now that I have, I regret the fact that I went AWOL from Fanfiction for awhile. This is a really good, simple renidition of the desert expieriance in OoT. Link is sarcastic, but serious at the same time, and Navi is totally in character for all the character that she is.

I like it. The desert was my favorite part of OoT, and the Twinrova battle was a hoot if you didn't die several times like I did my first go-round with them. (They're annoying sometimes!!)

Anyways, ranting aside, I like it. You do well telling first person from Link's PoV. Good job!! ^^ *faves*

Not too bad. Neat-ish ending. (HA! I SAID -ISH! MUHAHAHA!)
OMGAH! NO FREAKIN' WAY!
(At this moment, you pause, right?)

Sorry to disappoint you (I'm hyped on caffeine, so...), but...
IACTUALLYUPDATEDMYLEGENDOFZELDASTORY!! I got new inspiration! YES!
Please go check it out...?

Great oneshot. It was interesting how you used first person view here. And you described it really well. Reminds me of when I went through that part (I have the N64 version). Good luck on your other stories. :)

'Eye of Din' I take you've read that same fanfiction too?