Wow. Just wow. I liked how you kept the theme going throughout the one-shot, the theme of Namine being like a puppet. The Organization certainly treated her that way. And the other characters in this story (especially Namine herself) were spot-on. The haunting singing...that was good, too. Wow, writers like you make me wish I was better at what I do. This was just awesome. XD

Misery loves me. This reminded me of Fall Out Boy, possibly because I've been to see them and Dance Dance is stuck in my head. But maybe not. It seems to fit, and Namine isn't whored in this. Lightly mentioned with many, but Namine is cool anyway. You can't hate her for it.

LIKE.OMOGGMGOGOGOGOGKOGKGOKGOKGOGKOGKSOTGJWIOEPTGJWTIPG

SQUE.

you.

are.


THE


BEST.































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ANYWAYS.
THIS WAS PURE FUCKING AMAZING.
WITH A TOUCH OF PURE GOLD.
PERFECTION ON CRACK.
being eaten by little children
in awh of your mad skillz.

Oh w-o-w.

This was very... I don't know quite how to explain it! It was at times smooth and then there were parts were it was disjointed (like a wooden puppet) and it all came together in this tightly stringed awesome narrative. I loved the little bits such as "Doll" being 'affectionate' but "Witch" being something else. The little lyrics/quotes scattered throughout were very effective and worked in seamlessly with this little story...

I STILL LOVE THIS BTW!!

...I guess I pretty much gave you the benefit of my SQUEEFEST when I read this on eljay, b-but, I can't stand faving without leaving a review. :< So here it is yet again: I love--no, adore--this. And it's awesome and amazing and poetic and sparkly and speeshul and *_* it continues to make me all starry-eyed. ♥

I have no idea if you did, or didn't, take the last line from Fall Out Boy but, if you did, than I surely am observant. :) If not, I am clearly delushional.

Whatever the case may be, there is a constant: you being utterly awesome for the mere fact that I love Namine/Anyone There Is and this is just...

Heartbreaking.

Stylistically, this is so abstract and beautiful and...

I. Have. No. Words.

Not really, any way.

I love the ending; it's pure poetry in motion with the way you go about the scene. Lovely is really the only way I can describe it.

Gorgeous, breath-taking, inspiring--and darkly irresistable.

And so, so mad of awesome. Srysly. :3

- Pixie