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MiriamAcqua
2008-08-28
ch 1,
abuseMarvelous!. Simple, and perfect.
Lila Mae
2008-08-15
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abuseYou Rock My Socks! This was awesome! Revenge without actualy dirtying your hands... Priceless!
~*~Lila Mae
Mentally Disrupted
2008-07-31
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abuseI never really thought of the contacts, it is a very intresting contract. But I thought that if you did a magical oath like that that your blood and magic left your body resulting in a horribly painful death. Oh, well the Death Eaters still had to leave as the very thing they hated, a non magic user. So really it would be worse then death in their minds.
White Ivy
2008-07-31
ch 1,
abuseYeah! Long live fan-fiction!
This is an awesome story. i love the reasoning behind it.
Olaf Erikson
2008-07-22
ch 1,
abuseOne thing... where in the books does it say that Dumbledore was the one to cast the Fidelius Charm that hid the Potters when they went into hiding? As I recall, in PoA, Prof. Flitwick stated that the Fidelius Charm was... 'an immensely complex spell'...
It says nothing about who cast it. Everyone 'knew' that Sirius was the keeper of the secret. If that is the case, how would Dumbledore or even Flitwick (remember that Charms is his specialty) know about the change to Pettigrew at the last minute?
ReflectionsOfReality
2008-07-19
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abuseYou know as nice as it is trying to form a logic trap saying that Harry has not violated THAT contract would it not be just as easy to confund a different contract to get rid of Harry like swear he will not inhale or he does not live on the planet Earth or will not sleep or even will not use magic, each of which is almost guaranteed to strip a person of magic in the very near future.

Personally if I discovered such a method in that universe I would try my damndest to magically change my name to something that could not be falsified, maybe including the spell signature that counters the confundus charm? Or take a leaf from the artist formerly known as Prince and be the wizard Formerly known as Harry Potter but is now something unrecognizable symbol mixed with parseltongue.

Love finding plot holes where ever they may be,
~Reflections
GodricGryff
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abusedude, this was awesome, great idea for the magican ontracts.
Worldmaker
2008-07-14
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abuseBloody brilliant.
AndrewsQuill
2008-07-07
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abuseLoved it. The thought of what this really meant in the Goblet of Fire is really disturbing. Otherwise, your story would be a regular occurrence in the wizarding world.
Izabela75
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuseIt's genial idea. I like it very much. (sorry form my english)
rekrula
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abusewow, a wonderful premise! your story made me smile...and give an evil cackle!
HelKat
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuseReally good points, and really good irony in that. ^.^
skabs
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseyeah, like i've said before, i completely fail to see how any competent editor had missed those absurd plot holes!! while jk is a brilliant author, and created this entire world for us to explore, it does seem like she didn't really think it through very well. To tell the truth, i don't think she ever really expected to get so popular, so what she had planned was most likely much simpler than what it grew into... you have to wonder if SHE ever paused and asked herself if dumbledore really wasn't the villian in all this...?
anyway, this one is going up on my favorites! i love kibitzing with you! buh-bye!
Uniquely Jaded
2008-06-18
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abuseABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! And what a way they went!
dimriver
2008-06-09
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abuseMy guess is that they just told him that it was a binding contract, or um, yeah I hated that part of the GoF I can't really defend it.
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