Hey your story is amazing! I loved That's Why! It was the best Kingdom Hearts story I have ever read! I love The Afters too! It is a great story! It is really funny and well written! I really hope you update soon!

Keep on writing!

Tali, I'm sure you've heard this a thousand million times by now, but you are a genius. This is *the* best fanfiction I've read- ever. And I mean that. You've done an incredible job with keeping everybody- even the minor characters- in perfect character. You kept the elements of the game present as well. The plot, twists, every was perfect. I think the worst I can say for TW and TA is that you had a couple of typos here and there. (And that's nothing, really, because who doesn't make those?)

I've been addicted to this story (and I'm speaking for TW and TA as one) since I stumbled across Make Me a Deal and decided to take her advice and check out That's Why. Best decision I've ever made. This is my all time favorite fanfic, with probably the best parings on Earth. It had the perfect amount of SK fluff (which is what they are- both of them) and Riku/Neveah... well, whatever you'd classify there relationship as.

This story is incredibly inspiring, and I've even started writing my own KH fic (thanks to you.) I'm a little sad to see it hasn't been updated in a while, but I completely understand. Life can get in the way of great things. I'll be waiting for your updates, however long they may take. You can't rush perfection, after all.

Thanks a million
~RT~

I love uni lectures. especially since I'm required to be there despite have already completed the requirements. if i'd not been in a lecture i would've giggled like a schoolgirl (somewhere around grade three) every time the word 'kiss' was read in my mind... and the word' tenders' LOL. Beautiful, hilarious and sweet all in the one.

~Shazi-chan

I think what sticks out for me the most while reading this sequel is Sora's hilarious commentary. Between the game station and the fangirl bashing I was hysterical. There was a Mary Sue quip in there somewhere that had me cracking up for about 5 whole minutes. "His gym cubbyhole hadn’t seen so much attention since he was stuffed inside his first year of highschool. Once a torture-device. Now a hotspot." That was priceless. Where do you come up with this stuff? The only error I noticed was in this chapter: "By the look on Nevaeh’s face, she’d forgotten his bride." Ah, wishful thinking Heaven. ;P I was also wondering where the two stories mentioned at the bottom are. I used the links at the top (deleting the spaces) and it only led me back to this page. >_< They look so cute and I only have two chs left before I finish this. Help please?

OMG OMG i can't believe i didn't see this was updated! MAN i LOVE the new chapter and the rikuxnevaeh story! sque! you never fail to amaze me with your awesome writing skills! awesome job

haha! they're in Bambi! :D YAY! :D yeah i know u hate me! but i dont hate u! by the way, u're evil, for making the chapters so long, i didnt get to finish last night so i didnt know what happened til about 5 minutes ago! haha! no im kidding u're not evil! :D

luve,
Fairy!

Grr at you for making me laugh. I'm sick and it hurts to laugh! Plus I go into a big old coughing fit. Shame on you.

UH, dude. Why have I not been receiving updates via email anymore? 0_o

Ack!! I didn't see this until now? Oh noes! So terribly sorry for that. Yes, its nice to see you're back. Yay!! Once again a great chapter. I just love the little Riku/Nevaeh story at the end. You must make another chapter... as soon as you can.

AH! Yes! An update! I'm so thankful, no matter how short it was! And the oneshot was so cute! I love Riku and Nevaeh fluff, even after all this time! And you're still amazing! I'm sorry for whatever hard stuff has been going on, but I'm glad things are starting to get better for you! Update soon!

-C.A.

Yay! You're back!
Hm...seeing all you're reviews together makes me wonder...what is the most reviewed story on the site? Hm...


Anyways, onto your story: Play-by-play!

Hah! Nevaeh calls Axel landing on her castle murder! I loved the whole sandcastle thing.

Oh noes! You're going to torture the lovely SoKai?! That's just evil, compared to Riku/Nevaeh; which is just fun.

I must say, I adore the way Nevaeh addressed everyone with "Mr" and "Miss", especially Riku.

Oh, that was lovely, as always. Don't ever stop writing!

Cheers!
~Mars

Yay! It's glad to have ya back! I hope life gets a little less rougher with a capital R for ya. ;)

Wow, "The Flamer". Sure sound's like something Axel would drive. It sound's wonderfully garish, just how I like my Gummi ships.

So it's Bambi's world in the next chapter is it? Should be interesting. The oneshot was cute too. I hope that you update soon, but there's no hurry.

You're back! You're back, you're back, you're back!

The chapter was great and funny as usual. I liked how Riku initially refused to get into Axel's gummi ship, and how Kairi took up a posture that said 'The Doctor is in'. That was rather funny.

There's no spice?!

And Kairi is a cute wittle bunny-wabbit!

You're oneshot at the end with Riku and Nevaeh was also of high calibre.

May the Grace of the Valar Protect You

Shire Folk

So cute~! Loved that last bit!! Very happy to have an update of the story as well =D Keep writing!!

:D It was great to read more of your work! I almost forgot how much I loved your writing until I read this. It's been forever! Keep writing, you make us all so happy. Update soon!