Reviews for Erik the Loser

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Harry2 2007-12-20 ch 6,	abuseI'm glad that the family is going to England. And I suspect that Christian will be trying to recover the crown while he is in contact with the company that he is helping out with this internet site work as well!
Harry2 2007-12-20 ch 5,	abuseI think that Christian may have a plan to recover the crown! That is, if he and Leslie DO go to England!
Harry2 2007-12-20 ch 4,	abuseDO NOT try and change history Christian! You could cause all sorts of problems for your wife and family if you do!
Harry2 2007-12-20 ch 3,	abuseWell, the two of them have worked out some of their problems. Now, lets see if a trip is in the works, or if its going to be Time Travel!
Harry2 2007-12-20 ch 2,	abuseWell, its time to get ones feet wet again. And I think things are going to be VERY interesting for Christian and possibly Leslie as well.
Harry2 2007-12-18 ch 1,	abuseIt sounds like Sussanna may have picked up some of Leslie's empathic abilities. This could make her a future assistant for Fantasy Island, at the very least, a major help on the island.
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 6,	abuseYah! They are all going to London--Christian, Leslie, the triplets, Ingrid, and Jonathan (whose help will be essential to Christian, I hope--don't want to see him getting in the way while mooning over Ingrid lol) Passport photos for the triplets? This should be fun... Hooray! Flying on the royal jet, mucho cool! Hmm, the jet was built in Lilla Jordso, eh? Yes, very neat. I bet this whole adventure helps strengthen the ties between LJ and Arcolos. Cool, I hope we get the chance to see Errico in London, I've always liked him! Great story, and I can't wait for the rest...(though I must, of course). Loved it! Gordon
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 5,	abuseOh my, Asgar likes men, eh? Really a good thing that Lilla Jordso is such an open-minded place, even back then... At least Erik seems to be a jolly sort. Painful, then, for Christian, because it's within the realm of possibility he could have liked Erik. Poor, overconfident Erik... Darn, at least it was over quickly for Erik... Hmm, Christian leads the attack, in essence. Good thing for his military training all those years ago in the 20th century... Oh, good, he gets to keep the king's body safe for burial. I hope this ship survives the battle so Erik can be properly buried... Hurrah! They sunk three pirate ships. Definitely gave a good accounting of themselves. Lilla Jordso soldiers are good, if few in number. And good, Leslie's here to be with her hero. Good lines: “Well, whatever folly Erik perpetuated in his lifetime, one thing can be said for him—he certainly inspired loyalty. I was given to understand that my grandfather, Lukas VI, was very popular, but I have to wonder if even he could have spurred his troops on to sink three enemy ships in quick succession.” Leslie smiled and remarked, “Maybe Erik wasn’t quite such a loser after all.” I liked this chapter. Gordon
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 4,	abuseIt's always so wonderful to see the babies smiling. Hmm, gazpacho, eh? I've never had it before. But the salad, pineapple juice (fresh from the plantation, right? lol), and the ice cream sound yummy... Hehehehe...'Mariki and her staff had insisted on watching the triplets again, having fallen like a bunch of rocks under the babies’ spell. ' Those trips sound as adorable as my younger son, but at least, there's only one of him with his fully-powered cute ray--unlike the trips, where you have three fully-powered cute rays! Haha! A royal marina, eh? More information for the next edition of Anna-Laura's history book... (which I think will need to be coming out soon after the events of this summer with the birth of the triplets and all). Hm, I wonder if the time-travel room operates on similar principles to the Guardian of Forever? Oh, my, shirking his duties at the back of the regiment in the time of his country's need? Oh, the horror (snicker)... Let's see if Royal Glory survives the battle...maybe this wasn't the best idea, Christian, so good luck, my friend! Grand entrances for Erik, eh? Must be a jerk in the same class as Ulf and Arnulf... Oh boy, what a pompous turkey. But what a beautiful crown, especially the rainbow gem. Yup, bankrupting the country to serve his vanity. Lilla Jordso is certainly better off without him! Hm, I wonder what useful information, if any, Christian could get out of Erik? On to the battle! Gordon
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 3,	abuseGabriella was very annoyed by the ongoing filibustering tactics of conservative southwestern district representatives Hahahah, good line! It's not a bad idea to plan the Christmas Ball four months in advance, but that's just my opinion. I have a tendency to be a last-minute, spur of the moment person (this happens all the time with my birthday and Christmas shopping, alas), so I'm jealous a bit of those who are planners. Allegra Post is a GREAT name, and so is History Hunters. I think that group could be spun off into a series of adventures on FictionPress (big smile). Fabulous contract opportunity the London office, and Christian, have going on here. Hehehe...it's cute that Michiko can tell the trips apart. But then again, she is a mom, after all. Omigosh! Errico wants Enstad's services as well? What a ROCKIN' groovy concept! Oh, I hope they can work out this mess so Noelle and Alexander can spend time with their grandparents... Hahahaha, a royal jet for Errico? At this rate, sooner or later Christian's gonna have to have an airplane for his own trips around the world to all of his offices... Come to think of it, that would be a good investment, as he could use it to take Leslie and the triplets on vacations at the same time as well... Maybe this will all work out well in the end...wait a sec, it's Fantasy Island, it should work out some way or other LOL... I LOVED this chapter! Another favorite, lotsa groovy stuff happening! Gordon
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 2,	abuseOmigosh! Janine kissed him! He HAD to tell her the truth... You did a good job with his speech. And I can't believe her DAD sent her money...wasn't he the one who didn't want anything to do with her and her sister? Guilt money, perhaps? Mr. Greenstone has a groovy idea for a fantasy (but then again, I love time and dimensional travel fantasies...). Erik the Loser...hahahah, good title for the king and the story. Actually, Erik was lucky in one sense, that Henry the Eighth didn't try to conquer Lilla Jordso. But he still seems like he will be a bozo. Hey, that's a cool word--Glaschloiche. Mr. Greenstone has the right idea--find some info out about the guy for the family history. As long as this fantasy turns out successful, perhaps we'll see more time/dimension travel fantasies (hint, hint LOL). I chortled a bit about their 'discussion' of Christian going back and making Leslie jealous. And then Christian got her with the mormor comment. Priceless! Roarke is correct about Leslie's jealousy, but I am certain that he went about calming her down the right way. Not just because he's the all-nearly-powerful Roarke, but because he knows her better than anyone except maybe Christian. I think Christian doesn't want her to go back because he's afraid of losing her (like at the end of his last trip back into time!), and since he's found her, he doesn't want to lose her. Perfectly understandable, especially since Lilla Jordso is so badly hit by the plague nowadays..er, back then. Good dialogue and discussions in this chapter! Gordon
PDXWiz 2007-12-16 ch 1,	abuseUh oh, it's shot day! Hooray, Leslie and the trips came through with flying colors! Leslie's right, we do need spray hypos... A fantasy that will interest Christian will certainly interest me... Pretty nifty that Leslie will be starting back to work soon, so we can see more of the cool fantasies you dream up... Gordon
Bishop T 2007-12-16 ch 6,	abuseI knew this would happen! How great! I can hardly wait for the rest of what happens. Terry
Bishop T 2007-12-16 ch 5,	abuseIt is good that Christian saw how loyal the troops were to Erik and that they sunk 3 ships. It will be exciting when Christian later realizes that his visit to history will help him to get back the Royal crown in the near future with his new venture through his London office! Little does he know! Smart thinking on Leslie's part. Terry
Bishop T 2007-12-16 ch 3,	abuseI bet leslie's idea has something to do with a certain freind's family jet! Terry

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