Very very good! I loved it!

CT

fantastic job! It's dfficult to like Boq though. He comes across as a selfish little twerp in Wicked whom didn't really have much of a heart to begin with.

Ahh I love it! :) I'm a huge Wicked fanatic myself but it's /exceedingly/ rare that a fic is good enough to keep my attention. I'm the sort of person who /requires/ the kind of detail in real novels to keep my attention and you've given it. Your descriptions are lovely it's a nice length it's not overly long but it's long enough to keep my interest. I also love your portrayals of the characters. They're quite wel done! Boq's transformation into a man without a heart is scarily accurate. I'm very picky about my fics and I prefer them to be of the sort where Elphie is allergic to water, but making it more musicalverse based worked perfectly for this story and I totally enjoyed Fiyero's "Plot" to save her and how you integrated more detail into that than the play did. All in all it was a great story!

I loved this story! I love all Fiyeraba Scarecrow/Witch stories! I love Wicked!

You really mastered the dialogue. There were several clever parts such as getting Elphaba's attention by singing and adding the lyrics of songs to the story. I hope you write more!

Aw x3 Such a cute story! I enjoyed reading it and loved the happy ending :D Great job at making the Wizard of Oz and Wicked go together perfectly...you said you had trouble with the timing of everything...it sure didn't seem or feel that way...everything fit together perfectly congrats :D

Yay! I too have wondered what the Yellow Brick Road journey was like for Fiyero. I love your take on it! The only thing that would make me squee more is a flashback to Glinda giving directions to Dorothy *cough nudge *

i can't wait to read more. i am looking forward to reading when Elfi finds out Scarecrow is Fyaro.or however you spell it

another awesome chapter! Please continue and update soon!

iWant More!

so update soon!

I enjoyed reading this. Keep going!

Please update soon! I haven't been looking long, but of all the fics I HAVE looked at, this is one of the only ones that deals with Fieryo as a scarecrow--and Elphaba not knowing she made him one! Really unique. I can't wait to see where you take this!

Wow. This looks like it's gonna turn into a really good fic. There aren't nearly enough fics about what it was like for Fiyero when he was with Dorothy et al. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

This was great! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Interesting! I look forward to reading more. Well done. :)

i like the way you write. this was a very enjoyable chapter, with great insight and good detail, though not so much that it lost its point, which is my favorite kind.

i'm really looking forward to reading more. moments like the one between boq and yero are grand!

please update soon

d~