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| Pieda 2007-12-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow...they never really made any reference to the song in the game, but you summed it up quite nicely. That was so brilliantly written. Short but breathtaking. Melodia...ah, Melodia...should there be a third baten kaitos, I'd love for her to have a big role. |
| Twilit Wanderer - Dusk 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseYOu should continue this - as I have never seen a story explaining exaclty how Melodia became so twisted. It would be interesting to read. On topic: nice one-shot. I haven't seen many stories for Melodia, especially of this quality. |
| Legacy Now 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseOMG... I... love U! It was really good! The emotions and the way the story was going was so dramatic! I love it! I love it! I love it! -M. |
| LittleLinor 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuse... I love the atmosphere in this... but you'll still have t explain where you set it and the meaning you put under it XD |
| Ruingaraf 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseOoh, I like! ^-^ A bit of foreshadowing dor the game here. |