This is a facinating tale. I especially appreciate the deep and forceful nature of Teyla (so much more rich and varied from what we see in the series).

I would love to read more of Teyla's intereaction with her adopted people (the former Wraith--Todd in particular as he was the one that stood by her and gave her unconditional support during the first part of her journey).

How is AU John faring in his search for "his" Teyla? Don't care if it's a sequel or stand-a-lone fic just as long as it's written. Pretty please? :)

I loved this peek into your new story. I think you should continue it as a seperate piece...giving it a life of it's own. It would just be a sequel to LH.

Looking forward to more. Enjoy your writing as always.

I emailed you with my thoughts but I finally re-read this and I LOVE IT!

I love how it ended for this John and Teyla but I love how you left it with this unknown other timeline that now has me intrigued. Very intrigued. Like Teyla I want to see all of John's and Teyla's together and I want that other John to find his Teyla. What's more intriguing is that their scenario seems to want to play out differently with having Teyla be in a completely different place and circumstances than what our John found her.

And now, knowing that this other John knows what he can have with Teyla, after meeting this Teyla, will certainly cause an interesting unfolding of events. And I can't wait!

So, bring it on baby! I'm looking forward to a continuation in a different timeline.

Hugs,
Camy

Who is demanding things from you? You tell me and I'll take care of them! *wink*

Well, I Love Lonely Hunter. And I think this chapter and the rest of this should go as its own story because it will be very different from this one and it could stand alone as well.

Lonely Hunter has a nice johnteylaish ending that's fitting to that story.

I can't wait till you write this one, too.

And John all scarred...Oh, I want so badly to see when he joins with Teyla.

I have to say so far my interest is peaked. I would still like to know if the John towards the end of Lonley Hunter found his Teyla. I think you should just make this story a part two to Lonely Hunter. I'm not to big a fan of SG-1 so that part for me is slowing the story down but with the SG-1 team or with them I will be reading cause the story was excellent.

Very interesting. Vastly different than Lonley Hunter. I knew Vala used to be a Goa'uld but when did she get healing capabilities, she does not have the naniets(sp)? I like the dark and broken Sheppard. I would start this under a different story title that follows Lonely Hunter.

Well, this little peek defintely defines the meaning of teaser LOL!

Yes, you should defintely continue, if this IS what you have in store for your reader. This ware-maimed picture-painting version of John has me intrigued and I´d love to know more about him and his world.
And more crossing over with SG-1 - bring it on. ; )

And a new title - sounds logical ; ) - so I´m just happy that you´ll continue with this great concept. Have fun writing it!

Shirat.

Wow, I don't know what to say. This is a good and entertaining story. There are many questions unanswered or brought up but many good stories leave you wanting more. Great job!

This story was fantastic from beginning to end. You did an incredible job with this story. I was so sorry to see it end. Or maybe in another timeline the story continues. :)
Again,excellent job!

Very nice ending.

I've enjoyed this story immensely and I'm glad that Atlantis returned to Lantea and didn't stay on Earth. While Atlantis was built on Earth millions of years ago by the Alterans Earth is not its home anymore, that honour belongs to the Pegasus Galaxy.

All in all this has been a great story. I especially like your idea for the ninth chevron its certainly alot better than the idea they're using for Stargate Universe.

This has been a wonderful story like your others have been. Rich with complex concepts of people, politics and love.

Thanks for the journey.

Wow.

I found this story a few hours ago and haven't been able to stop reading it since. Its truly a great story and I can't help but wonder what is going to happen next. I like how you've got John and Teyla together as its a combination that you don't see often - at least in my experience.

I will follow the rest of this story with great interest. Hope you continue soon.

Wow, you must have a lot of repressed anger, where those torture scenes come from, they were intense and well written. Great story, keep going. What did Teyla mean by, "It's time for Atlantis to return to Earth" before everyone went back to Atlantis?

Wow, what an escalation of events. Very cool twists. Great job. I can't wait until the next part.

I loved this.