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| P.M.Hall 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseIt was funny, but kind of predictable. The best part was the end where Jon caught the whole thing on a webcam. How was he prepared to shoot that? That's where the real humor is. As far as grammar or spelling goes, you did okay. It's really annoying to read a story that has bad grammar and spelling. The only mistake I saw, was in the part where Garfield fell into hell. Instead of saying "As Garfield fired the cannon, the explosion was so powerful that it caused the ground beneath him, and Binky to erupt, and send the fat cat hurtling underground!" Change send to sent. All in all it was a good Garfield fan-fic. |
| bombero 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked your story. It was a interesting idea. Just who were nermal, cactuas jake and the buddy bears? Were they made up charcters or were they in a comic or tv show? |
| Ocytavia 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThe story was... Different. I can't say it was the best story. The storyline was alright, but the writen work could do with some improvements. Sorry. OcyTaviAh (Terribly sorry, but you've just recieved the worse revew I've ever posted. I feel awful. Sorry, sorry, sorry!) |
| wallyworld 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abusethis is so boring cunm up with something good |
| selinnium 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseAw.. poor Garfield :( Jon's mean *stabs Jon with a pencil* Funny though ^^ |
| Lord OF Illusion 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseGarfield is the freakin M A A A A A A A A A A N! Ah, what was this story about? |