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Much better and calmer than on the show! I really liked it. :D

Awe so sweet! This could have been a scene from the show, it was funny, heartwarming, and truly "Gilmore". Fabulous Job!

Luke really was a jerk when it came to that episode, but then again so was Lorelai. Damn that ASS-P.

Cute!

Seriously, this has to be one of the best gifts I've ever gotten. I mean, it's seriously up there with my Spice Girls bike from the second grade. This was just great. I absolutely love it to pieces. Seriously, why weren't you assisting Amy when she write the show? Your fics are always way better than what happened, and definitely more enjoyable. I loved seeing Luke and Lorelai talk about the kids. Stuff like that always makes me smile like an idiot. Though I was a bit mad at Michel for interrupting. But I guess that's where my imagination comes in. Thanks so much for my ever so amazing gift! You're awesome, Java!

if only it had gone that way on the show...

yet again you amaze me...

i loved it!

I was very excited to see this new story, Java! It was quite awesome.

good story. have you thought about that idea of that story of kylie yet.

that was good I like your version way better. unfortunately michel had to interupt just when he was going to tell her about the house. or did he tell her already. I have to brush up on my gilmore girls history. I haven't really watched since that debacle that was season 7. still miffed about that. update soon :)

ahh totally love it pleasei am begging you to make this a chapter story not just a oneshot

Yay! that was so great, Java - you are very good at the missing/AU scene business! Make cards!

All kidding aside, this was very sweet!

Once again, cute! I've read very few stories of yours' that aren't. You've definitely got the characters down; their reactions and all are totally believable. Great job!

aw, now why a oneshot?