was it hermione or lily! please tell me!

;)

THE GIRL WAS ME!

the girl...me. Just teasing probably Hermione, I would say lily but natural redheads can't usually get tanned. Sweet little fic.

this was really good i loved it and i think the girl was lily

W00t! I feel so much like a perv now.. '

*Thumbs* xD

Lily?

no I'm not saying your name, is it Lily though?

nice story.

D&S

i liked this a lot except for the title b/c i was waiting for him to wake up. perhaps the ending would be more bittersweet and interesting if the title hadn't set up for it? i did like it tho... at first i thought of hermione, then i decided upon **l* from DH.

*AL

"cried out with a sequel of delight."

...a *sequel* of delight? I think you've run afoul of your spellchecker. ;)

Hmm...I do wonder XD haha, no I don't, but for the sake of people who haven't read The Deathly Hallows, I won't tell who that is! Great little one-shot here, but I felt really bad for Snape at the end of that book.

Wow, that was... interesting *blushes slightly* Nonetheless, well written. I think it was Lily :)

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was it hermione? huh? was it? was it? I think it should be.

Good overall, just a bit hard to follow at some points...