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| Kai 2008-08-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute. :3 |
| Disco Ant 2007-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseI agree, the song goes well with the story. The end scares me, but other than that it's very well written. :3 Well, the end is well written, too, but scary. xD For a first attempt, you did good. I think you should be scared of this. xD |
| Nani Lupin 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice story. The song actually went with the story, which is saying something. The description at the begining of Lupin and Fujiko fighting was well done. Creepy as I find all yaoi, this was the least creepy. If that makes sense. XD |