That last line was beyond epic. xD I think that you did a pretty good job considering this is your first yaoi. I really do wish that you could have went more in detail about blushing & the 'tight heat that was around Matt's cock'. Mainly just more detail for the sex scene in general. That probably would have made it a bit better if you asked me. I was sort of like 'Woah!' when I saw that Matt was seme in this. That's purrrty bitchin'. ;D But anyway, I think that it was a good little MattxMello oneshot

LOL! I'm still laughing (and I read it 5 minutes ago I can only now just barly type) Matt's gonna get it after Rodger leaves

The last line was hilarious -

And the window.

ahahahahaha XD

"Your right mello you should have that thing cut off!" hahaha that made me laugh at the end. Your matt is awesome! XD

aren't they supposed 2 b geniuses?'Dur, lets have sex in front of a frikin' WINDOW!' I understand ur need to say ass, balls, and dildo. They r fun words 2 say and rite! LOL, Roger caught them. Mello must be so angry about not gettin a blow job...

omg, i was laughing before i even started the story *I bent down and my boobs hit the delete button* friken Hilarius! i love the story as well!

WOW! that was awesome! but Roger just HAD to walk in didn't he?

but don't worry about it, i forgive you, the beggining of the story made up for the end... XD

"Well, Mello had to show me something and you know what Mello you were right, you defiantly should get that thing cut off."

I think I popped a lung laughing.

'you should defiantly get that thing cut off' LOL! I love that so much ]

I LOVE IT! These two belong together!

that was ver ver funny, and cute! Yes oh how matt is just so odd... but very enticing. Happy birthday mello...

OMFG XD loved it man...charicter portrail was perfict while still hot...good thing i went to read your other stories! hope i can read more of your DN stuff whenever you get the insperation to write out some more.

Oh my god, that ending was hilarious! I love this! The window falling out was amazing too. XD

I LOVE THIS! 0_0

Damn that was weird. No amount of quick thinking or explanation will change what is obvious XD And boy, was that obvious O.O Hilarious, though XD