I was thinking of submitting a story or two for this pair since I haven't done so in a while. I thought I'd see what's been posted lately... I'm not sure what to think of the story.

It's a gag fic, right? Perhaps mislabeled? Because your characters are very far from canon - complete opposites, I'd say. I'm quite disappointed since I'd so looked forward to a good romance... Oh well.

If this wasn't intended to be gag fic, and you are serious about the 'romance', perhaps you should study the characters again. Tsuki is too sensitive to treat people that way, let alone his lover. And Chichiri? *laughs* He would so kick Tasuki's butt for even trying.

you really should put that it is a parody^^ But is true that Tasuki is always yelling and drunk i am happy that Chichiri will be happy with Hotohori^^
Die Tasuki die you are a **

OMFG! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! You go girl! I almost fell off my chair reading it! Yeah, enough wih the oh-so-handsome-and-great-seishis, look at the other possible side of things! Oh, Hotohori was super cool, rescueing his damsel in distress, captured by evil Fang boy! Great job from a super mega ultra Fushigi Yuugi fan! ^_^

Oh. My. God.

My friend sent this to me via AIM and it was just so hysterically bad, it's amazing. I loved the neighbor, especially his "gayer than something really, really gay" line. Hotohori's entrance was spectacular too I might add.

Very nice, lmao.

No! Nothing can ever stop twue wuv! Never ever!

-Huggles Chichiri- So friggin' adorable...and on a random note, I happen to love fish. Tasuki does NOT know what he's missing. Funny that we're going to devour it tomorrow night ^.^

I just love the description...and sakura! -happily bats at the petals as they flutter about her- Such marvelous writing! Truly amazing! I applaud you!

Kinda sad, but true: If they ever did pair up, 'Chiri would have to be the woman. (Lolz, a pink apron...) That sexy-beast-cake of a bandit could not pull off the feminine role in the slightest, although that would make a frigging amusing mental image right about now.

You know I don't usually write flames for other people's work, but this time I really must say that this was the most disapointing FY story I have yet to read. Chichiri is my favorite character, and I personally think that he is the strongest character in the whole series in many ways. I despised how you persented him as a whiny, whimpering wuss. Also, Tasuki is my second favorite character and he has more of a heart than you gave him. I actually like Tasuki and Chichiri pairing and I believe you did the series and the characters a diservice in your story.

Lmao!! XD Dee-san sent me this story over aim, and I was literally rolling with laughter! XD Well, then again, it's probably also because I know it wasn't serious, and that you two had been talking about how you hate FY yaoi pairings...but anyway, this story is genius! It's pure genius! XD

Have I mentioned before that you're my hero? I think I did, but to reiterate: You are absolutely my hero. Who knew that one late night of bad jokes could create something as magical as this?

I can't believe you actually put this thing under "romance." You REALLY want to get flames, don't you? Bwahahaha... I think it's hysterical though. For some reason, my favorite line is still "Damn Genrou, yer always drunk... why can' ya be more like me?" And the one about 'Chiri being Taiitukun's favorite girl... ah, I may have to go read it again. It never fails to make me chuckle. Oh, and nice title choice, by the way. It sounds like a bad romance novel.

This is the most horrid, disturbing, and HILARIOUS thing I've had the pleasure of reading in a long time. Congrats, my scary Ane-san friend. Unrealistic yaoi never felt so good. XD

(Adds to Favorites!)

Um...okay. First of all Tasuki would never treat Chichiri that way. Once his heart with someone he is loyal. Second of all Chichiri would never let Tasuki treat him that way nor would he be that weak. Also Kouji wouldn't be that stupid and tasuki would have told his ototo that he was in a relationship with the monk. If this was suppose to be a humorous fic that is should have been in that catergory rather than the romance. Even though your grammar is fine, I really don't like the character bashing. Tasuki is my favorite character and he is nothing like you what you protrayed in this fic!