Scarey stuff. Good story.

GOLLY GOSH THAT WAS SCARY! MAN! YOU ARE AWESOME AT HORROR! Loveley ending! OOH! I'm STILL scared!

Ok, so it might be odd to you to get another review almost three years after posting a story, but what the hell, here's my 2p. VERY BLOODY GOOD! Amityville meets Knight Rider eh? Characterisation between Michael and Kitt is spot on, the whole plot reeks of greatness, and is very well written. Only a couple of mis-spells, which I guess can be forgiveable in a long fan fic. Have enjoyed this little tale very much, and will be checking back with the authors other works. A very big well done.

Okay, this is wicked bad fanfic. And, like all good horror movies, the threat lives on..

All in all, a good job.

mm hope you write more stories loved it!

Well written, very spooky! Reminded me of a Stephen King fic.

Bloody good story. Absolutely excellent.

And a very bad idea to read at night. *laugh* Many stories don't scare me like they do most people, but this one did. It creaped me out, to say the least. That must mean it was exceptionally well written.

Fairly old story though. Still.. Excellent.

You are an excellent writer with a very vivid writing style.

Hope you continue to write like this. Maybe something a bit more humorous next time?

Yeep. Glad I didn't read this at night. Very well done.

Beyond words...but I'll try! Characters were well done,

I could almost see the place in my mind. Spooky story grabs you

and won't let go til it's finished! (ouch!) Well written from beginning to end.

Please write more stories, you are very, very, very good! *applause* :-D

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

Great story - very involving and exciting! I hate to sound cliche - an action-packed adventure! Anywa liked it. :)

Great Story! Creepy!

great story! would love to see a sequel! :o)

omg omg omg...how good was that? *reminds herself never to read something this scary before bed*...mk

That was _so_ good! Very creepy! I really liked it!