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| BobWhite 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abusegr8 story. |
| AnickaMarie 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was a beautiful story. Joey remembered the real reason for the season that so many people have forgotten or dismissed. Now I regret not having the time to read this sooner. |
| kimi-lee22 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseAhh it was so cute! I had to go get my bunny to have something to squish. And I loved that he got the true reason for the season...four years old, that's a really great gift. ^_^ Any ways its really cute. Thanks for writing it. |
| lauriena 2007-12-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story its so cute and true, and i love inocent joey bringing things to light in his own specail way thank you for posting it here |
| Log Off Now Please 2007-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseLooks good. Very cute and tottaly believable. If Sam didn't come right then, Joe probbably would have been kidnapped. |
| Jimmy Candlestick 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseaw! that has to be the best Christmas story i've ever read! |
| ShinigamixGirl 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAww...how cute! > |
| SUPERNATURALfreakisJOBROFAN... 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis one had me in tears I swear it did. |
| PorscheDsgn 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI cannot tell you how much this story means to me. It's heart-lifting and filled with the TRUE wonder of Christmas - a wonder that a little boy got right away. Thank you so much for writing a brilliant and eloquent story and for sharing it with the rest of us. You have a true gift. Porsche |
| imakeladrygirl 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseA wonderfully written story that celebrates the true meaning of Christmas...don't see too many of those. Yours is a gem! Have a Merry Christmas as we celebrate His birthday! |
| metascrawler 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful story on the Christmas season. 'What Child is this' is one of my fav carols too (but then again, I have too many fav carols.. :) Have a blessed Christmas as you celebrate His miraculous birth! :) |
| Red Hardy 2007-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYeah, I'm too lazy to sign in but you know where to find me anyway! :p YAY! I love, love, LOVE this story!! But you already know that! Still, I got to read it yet again - third time just this Christmas season! ;) My favorite part is still Sam and little Joey going to the church together. But my favorite line is: And in a manger, in the front of a church, a small wooden baby carefully swaddled in a powder blue blanket, smiled… *SIGH* This story always makes me all warm and fuzzy inside! So glad you decided to share it with everyone here! :) |
| Valtira 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseYou captured the essence of Christmas which so many have forgotten these days. Thank you for a wonderful story and the joy of "Happy Birthday"! Merry Christmas |
| pandora jazz 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseThank you for the wonderful Christmas story and for sharing it with us. |
| TraSan 2007-12-12 ch 1, | abuseWow, Phx...just wow. First of all, you picked one of my favorite Christmas Carols as a mother. The sweet joy Mary felt at the birth of her son coupled with a special pain knowing WHY he was born. An almost meloncholy song that perfectly conveys the meaning of the season. Little Joey taking his blanket to keep baby Jesus warm and the ending..."Happy Birthday?" I'm all choked up. It's simply beautiful. |