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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Lindsay was comforting Danny. |
| Aphina 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHow do I keep missing these little sories that you put up? I really enjoyed your take on Danny's emotions regarding Ruben. I thnk it's usually very differcult to explain how char feels in a situation like this and you pulled it off exceptionally well. Tehre's the little things you gave us like the bruises on Linds that really made your writng stand out. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-01-29 ch 1, | abuseGood little angsty piece, matches the gray skies outside. Sorry I missed this until now! I like the struggle portrayed within Danny here, I think it speaks a lot of his struggles in general between good and bad, light and dark and so on. |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseaww poor danny that ep makes me so sad *sniff* |
| MeredithandDerekfanforever 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. Brandy |
| kcatlin 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good!! |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWhat to say? I'm like Lindsay. I don't really know what to say. Sad & beautiful at the same time. |
| DAnNSfreak 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseSpoliers? I don't care! I won't be able to watch the episode til next year, so bring it on!! Lol. That was so incredibly sad. Poor Danny. Poor Ruben. Great job! |