 THwriter 2009-05-18 . chapter 14it's been quite a while since i read that story! not sure i remember all of it but this chapter was good! i can't wait to see what's going to happen next! update soon please :) |
 AJeff 2009-05-15 . chapter 14Love the update. This story all came back to me. Loved the images which flashed in my head, especially the Elle and Sylar scene. Yes, monsters they are. |
 marinawings 2009-05-14 . chapter 14i'm really glad you updated! this story seems to be coming along nicely. i like the little plot twists, and your characterizations are spot on. keep up the excellent work! |
 DreamerLoverHaterKillerMolder 2009-03-27 . chapter 13Please continue soon!I'm as big fan of Alex, she's a lot like me. |
 THwriter 2008-10-15 . chapter 13great chapter! update soon please this story is really good! |
 marinawings 2008-10-13 . chapter 13good chapter! the title of the story makes so much sense now. they are all obsessed with something. seems to be a common trait among heroes. once again, i'm loving the characters' relationships. nathan and alex and their concern for peter... i really like that. and peter being all self-sacrificial--very peter. and the ending was really good--surprising. keep up the good work! |
 AJeff 2008-10-12 . chapter 13 Hey! I couldn't review cause I already reviewed your Chapter 13 earlier. Had do to this anonymously. Even better ending. I love the vanishing Peter. Well done! |
 AJeff 2008-10-12 . chapter 13Hey! You updated! I really loved this chapter, especially the ending.
“He took my power,” she cried in a small voice.
Wished it was longer...update soon. |
 THwriter 2008-09-21 . chapter 12good chappie. uds soon please! |
 AJeff 2008-09-20 . chapter 12Yes, it would have been so much easier and faster for Claire if she was a part of the "Flying Petrellis".
Nathan wouldn't be Nathan if he didn't worry about his little brother. I love the scenes between Nathan and Alex.
"Until she felt the presence of a cotton and polyester blend draped around her shoulders. She quickly placed the jacket on, the wool lining warming her neck, arms and torso." This scene I could see in my head. Great description.
“Hi, honey. I’m home,” she whispered into his ear.." Okay, this gave me goosebumps.
Great chapter. |
 marinawings 2008-09-19 . chapter 12there is so much suspense in this story! i love that. and i'm still loving the way you write your characters. they are very in character, and i can feel their emotions: claire's frustration, nathan's worry for peter, etc. i love the relationship between alex and nathan. it's kind of similar to nathan and phoebe's relationship in my story. they play off each other's wit and are always looking out for peter. i love that, too. |
 THwriter 2008-09-14 . chapter 11well that was a great update. update soon please, i can't wait to see what happens next |
 Readerfreak10 2008-09-13 . chapter 11this was great
goodluck with your muse |
 marinawings 2008-09-13 . chapter 11I'm so glad you updated! I was truly missing this story. Excellent chapter! Yes, Peter has Nathan and Alex to look after him. And I used to watch He-man and She-ra when I was little! That made me laugh. Anyways, good work. I'm worried about Peter, too! |
 AJeff 2008-09-12 . chapter 11Ouch! Peter's not a punching bag. Alex needs to trust Peter.
I wished Nathan and Claire would really talk to each other. Everything is not alright. They do need one another. They can sense each other's feelings. They are related. And that second call of Nathan's...who was that?
I love those scenes with Molly and Mohinder. |