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THwriter
2009-05-18 . chapter 14
it's been quite a while since i read that story! not sure i remember all of it but this chapter was good! i can't wait to see what's going to happen next! update soon please :)
AJeff
2009-05-15 . chapter 14
Love the update. This story all came back to me. Loved the images which flashed in my head, especially the Elle and Sylar scene. Yes, monsters they are.
marinawings
2009-05-14 . chapter 14
i'm really glad you updated! this story seems to be coming along nicely. i like the little plot twists, and your characterizations are spot on. keep up the excellent work!
DreamerLoverHaterKillerMolder
2009-03-27 . chapter 13
Please continue soon!I'm as big fan of Alex, she's a lot like me.
THwriter
2008-10-15 . chapter 13
great chapter! update soon please this story is really good!
marinawings
2008-10-13 . chapter 13
good chapter! the title of the story makes so much sense now. they are all obsessed with something. seems to be a common trait among heroes. once again, i'm loving the characters' relationships. nathan and alex and their concern for peter... i really like that. and peter being all self-sacrificial--very peter. and the ending was really good--surprising. keep up the good work!
AJeff
2008-10-12 . chapter 13
Hey! I couldn't review cause I already reviewed your Chapter 13 earlier. Had do to this anonymously. Even better ending. I love the vanishing Peter. Well done!
AJeff
2008-10-12 . chapter 13
Hey! You updated! I really loved this chapter, especially the ending.

“He took my power,” she cried in a small voice.

Wished it was longer...update soon.
THwriter
2008-09-21 . chapter 12
good chappie. uds soon please!
AJeff
2008-09-20 . chapter 12
Yes, it would have been so much easier and faster for Claire if she was a part of the "Flying Petrellis".

Nathan wouldn't be Nathan if he didn't worry about his little brother. I love the scenes between Nathan and Alex.

"Until she felt the presence of a cotton and polyester blend draped around her shoulders. She quickly placed the jacket on, the wool lining warming her neck, arms and torso." This scene I could see in my head. Great description.

“Hi, honey. I’m home,” she whispered into his ear.." Okay, this gave me goosebumps.

Great chapter.
marinawings
2008-09-19 . chapter 12
there is so much suspense in this story! i love that. and i'm still loving the way you write your characters. they are very in character, and i can feel their emotions: claire's frustration, nathan's worry for peter, etc. i love the relationship between alex and nathan. it's kind of similar to nathan and phoebe's relationship in my story. they play off each other's wit and are always looking out for peter. i love that, too.
THwriter
2008-09-14 . chapter 11
well that was a great update. update soon please, i can't wait to see what happens next
Readerfreak10
2008-09-13 . chapter 11
this was great

goodluck with your muse
marinawings
2008-09-13 . chapter 11
I'm so glad you updated! I was truly missing this story. Excellent chapter! Yes, Peter has Nathan and Alex to look after him. And I used to watch He-man and She-ra when I was little! That made me laugh. Anyways, good work. I'm worried about Peter, too!
AJeff
2008-09-12 . chapter 11
Ouch! Peter's not a punching bag. Alex needs to trust Peter.

I wished Nathan and Claire would really talk to each other. Everything is not alright. They do need one another. They can sense each other's feelings. They are related. And that second call of Nathan's...who was that?

I love those scenes with Molly and Mohinder.
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