*Hugs Roxas and Axel* you two... communication... Severely lacking. You two should have just finally said what you meant rather than dancing around the idea. Poor Roxas.
This is a really good fic. It made me sad, tho. Poor guys. And that last line was heartbreaking. Well done; evoking emotions in a reader is good!

Aw so cute and so sad! ;o;
I feel sorry for AXel...still...but I feel sorry for Roxas too...wah...
That reminds me, the other day, my frind told me to act like Roxas, so I flipped my hair all funny, yelled "No one would even notice if I left!" and stalked off. No one noticed. XD;;

I LOVED this!
I wish I could write in first person like that. Like, as the main character...also being the narrator. I tend to do those dumb little thoughts that pop up in the apostrophes xD
UNGH I JUST WANNA HUG ROXAS!! AND DRAG HIM BACK TO AXEL! AND TIE THEM TOGETHER T^T
KER-FAVE!

Thats short, sweet, AMAZING, sad, AND UTTERLY PERFECT!

Okies, so I'ma gonna go through and read and review and clutter up your inbox because I am bored as bored can be and the damned doujinshi won't download very fast.

*twitch twitch*

And I sick and tired of waiting for LiveJournal which takes three and a half hours to load ONE GODDAMN PAGE.

*twitch twitch twitch*

ANYWHO.

I don't normally like AkuRoku, but, like I said, I am bored and if I move from my computer some little vermin will come and steal my connection. I swear to God you have to fight them off with sticks and flamethrowers here.

Eh. Axel, you twisted bastard. I slap you. I slap you hard.

... I can't believe I'm saying this, but...

Poor Roxas.

*dies*

O.o WOW.

ohh i loved it!! so sad TT_TT

u know... the first time i finished the game.. i hated Roxas XD i hated him because he didn't love Axel back. or well he didn't remember him! i can u forget about someone like him? XD

anyway... it started to grow on me but only in fanfictions... i just can help it but to me Roxas is really cold hearted and i don't like that.

so this kinda Fanfictions make me like him. figured u have to have a great exuse to walk away on axel and being in love is a good one XD

hey... whats OTP??

aw poor Roxas ahahhaha that was a little straightforward but it was funneh~ hahahha i like how he talked..

That was a really interesting perspective. I haven't ( not that I'm widely read in the ways of KH fanfiction ) seen anyone who's used Axel as a reason for Roxas leaving. It definitely fits ... Really original, I think =D you seem to be pretty good at originality ...
I enjoyed it greatly, even if it was really depressing.