rotflmao omg that was brilant! BRILIANT i tell you. omg wow that made my day.

That was great! It was very funny and sweet.

At first, I thought it was just a prank Vaan played on Panelo, but you turned it into something really sweet. Absolutely adorable!

OHMIGOSH

OHMIGOSH

OHMIGSOH

I got me a Christmas fic! I got me a Christmas fic!

(Squeals uncontrollably.)

So this was, like, the best thing EVA.

I haven't stopped talking about it since I discovered this wonderful little masterpiece. It's just...perfection. On a monitor. And I am now in love with my monitor.

So. First things first.

RATSBANE. OH MY GOSH YOU GAVE VAAN A LAST NAME!

Where oh where did you get that from? It's ingenius, I say. Ingenius. It sounds so...Vaan like. And yes! You commented on the fact Penelo has three different outfits for three different games! (FFXII, Revenent Wings, Tactics.) Vaan at least puts a shirt on for the former. It adds plus ten to his sexuality.

Vaan. Will. Die.

HA HA HA HA!

And, oh! I love the little tid bits you put in here, like Penelo forgetting to refer to Ashe as /Ashelia/. Like she could ever call her anything but.

(And in Revenent Wings she is ALWAYS chastising Vaan for not referring to The Queen in more cordial terms. Funny to see it the other way around.)

Staring. At. Me in BED SHEETS.

Gotta love the sporadic punctuation. XD

"Vaan is a strategic thinker sometimes."

ROTF! LOL! ROTF! LOL! EEGASP!

Yes, Balthier, you would think so, now wouldn't you?

"VAAN happened to my clothes!"

If taken out of context, you can not get a stranger sentence than that.

"Yes, this is so," I hmphed.

Hmphed is a verb now! Ah! I love it!

BECOMING DRUNK OFF HI POTIONS!

HA HA HA HA!

(Vaan: Dude, it doesn't work...)

And what's this? The use of the word 'quandry?' From Larsa? PURE GENIUS. That was the best string of sentences ever! OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE PART: RIGHT THERE.

(Still snickering about Larsa.)

"...I will bash your head in with a rock somehow!"

I can SO see Penelo saying that. Or, rather, yelling it at the top of her lungs. Just the whole 'somehow!' part. It's like she kicked you off the computer and wrote this herself.

(Girlish fantasies, I believe.)

Oh! Just how you put that in there with parenethesis made my heart sing. I love eccentric wording and timing. Or spacing. Or whatever it is you call that. Creative use of the parenethesis.

WE WOULD HAVE HAD INTELLIGENT CHILDREN!

BWA HA HA HA! (Spits out drink) HA HA HA HA!

"...when have I ever disliked clothes? Even if they are terribly uncomfortable in the desert, I will still wear them, because they are clothes."

And that's like the best Penelo line ever.

I swear, I hear her voice chanting in my ears.

"...my moronic sky pirate."

What a way with pet names you have, Penelo. XP

And so this has been officially dubbed AMAZING and FULL OF WIN by me. Because I said so.

And ohmigosh. My first Christmas fic! Ever!

(Squeals herself into asphyxiation.)

Well now, that was counter productive, Vixen.

Let it be known your fic is almost done! I've got the closing paragraph to finish up, and then I shall post!

(It's called All In The Name Of Water, just to let you know.)

And the title The Bed Sheet SAGA is just too cool for words.

Like, saga. I love that word.

That was hilarious and really made me laugh. I had a feeling that Vaan was up to something good, but I love the way you end it. Vaan really is an idiot sometimes and you captured it really well, great job!

'“I knew it would happen eventually,” he shook his head.'

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA. There needs to be a Tomaj-matchmaker fic.

Vaan/Penelo seriously needs more love. It's practically canon, and yet nobody ever seems to ship it. Tragic.

This was wonderful!