CURSED! Who dares to curse MY Subaru!!

*cough* *cough* I really hope you'll update soon ^_^

Oh my gosh, this is extremely interesting. But Seishiro coulda killed Suba-kun!! But still, this story has interesting twists and turns and I like it!! This happened after the first OVA, right? Well have you read the manga? Or did you just think that this was a good scenario? But keep writing this story!

YOU LEAVE IT THERE?! RAWR! How could you? Now I have to sick my evil chibis of doom on you!

All right, I need to comment on this fic before I forget because you deserve a review. When I first read the starting two chapters of this fic I thought "Wow, that's different than most TB fanfics go" but then I just kind of ignored it because I didn't know if you'd get any better or just flop. You didn't flop, I read the next two chapters in one sitting, and I think my family thought I was turning into a crazy person or something because I was NOT giving up the computer. Anyway, like I said, this is very interesting, your writing is very good, sometimes lacking in power but for something that's written just for fun it's plenty good enough. The one problem I have is the plot point of having Subaru nearly getting hit by a car. To me, it just seemed a bit extreme, the story could have moved on if Subaru just kept rambling nonsense. But that's just me. I'm adding this to my alerts, I want to know what happens next.

Oh, and I should point this out, there's a wierd thing with the formatting on where you get random spaces in sentences that has two little squares there. It's really weird to read through like that.

omfg,subaru's been cursed.u gotta update this is getting good...even though its a bad sytuation for the characters.>.

...now this is some heart pounding drama.update whenever u can^-^

omg whats happenining to poor subaru,i want to know more.plz update whenever u can ok?

A good point for you for doing a TB story !! There are not enough of it on earth I think !! ^^
It seems that you're using the first OVA, it's a good idea, few people I've seen them.
So far I like your story and your writing, but I'm waiting to see what your plot will be.
And why do you write Seishiro's name with two -s ? I've never seen this spelling... (I'm just curious, it's not really important)
Hold on !! I hope to see more chapter ^^

This is good. Easy to read and interesting.