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Dralan Asguard
2009-09-19 . chapter 4
hey ill take this story under my wing. i hope that i will do it justice tho cause well i like the plot of the beginning of it and well i will see what i cannot do for it to make it work
LiYinBlake
2008-07-19 . chapter 3
O.o You made Ranma a ladyboy...*bursts into hysterical laughter* Please write more of this.
masaki yang yi1
2008-05-23 . chapter 3
Oh poor Ranma,,to be treated to the full course of Kuno

at lunch no less. Will you be keeping Nabiki as the IInzake or will Akane change her mind? Will there be a yuri lemon in the work's? Or will it be full bi sexual lemon?
keichan2
2008-04-21 . chapter 3
I hope you'll be able to update soon!

I DO wonder how his "condition" will change things...
Anttolas
2008-04-15 . chapter 3
i'm reading and hope you can keep writing so i can read teh following chapters of this story i find it interesting, i'll be wsaiting:)
Rose1948
2008-04-12 . chapter 3
Short, yes. Still funny, though.
Innortal
2008-04-11 . chapter 3
Nice and twisted.
ranma hibiki
2008-04-11 . chapter 3
*cackles* this is too funny, someone will have to pry the money away from nabiki an pay me to give any pity to ranma
xD
masaki yang yi1
2008-03-31 . chapter 2
Ranma the hermaphrodite and engaged to Nabiki the swich hiter to boot,that just might be worth reading and if there are lemon chapter's. I pitty that writer who has to write those chapter's.
QundraDraconum
2007-12-31 . chapter 2
ok, not sure what to make of this one. It's definitely an interesting take on the aqua transsexual, though you're doing more than bending the rules of the story by taking away the water aspect and making it a full time curse. Then his lack of response to something that is both more permanent and more classically unusual than the other curse is extremely odd.
Anttolas
2007-12-31 . chapter 2
good good, fun fun, hope you come out with next chapter soon:)
Innortal
2007-12-30 . chapter 2
Odd, but I'll keep reading.
keichan2
2007-12-26 . chapter 2
Hello!

At first, I thought it would be similar to "Path of Chaos: Ascension of Supremacy" by Lord Rance.

Your little twists first at birth, then in Jusenkyo, were quite unexpected... And, if the second chapter is any indication, may turn up funny...

I wonder how Nodoka will react... And what about Kuno and Ukyo...

Please update soon!
moritynz
2007-12-23 . chapter 2
its funny and shows promise, update soon
sscrivener
2007-12-23 . chapter 2
Well, this is... different.

Interesting premise you have here. I'll definitely be interested in seeing where you go with it.
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