 Hazmatt 2009-06-20 . chapter 1Wonderful story! I really enjoyed it! The ending was perfect! |
 Aislinn Carter 2007-12-13 . chapter 1it's nice to see Braxton portrayed as something other than a deranged crazy...i was just watching Relativity yesterday and honestly, I don't even get it. This is a nice story, especially after watching Relativity! |
 Shadowtheory 2007-12-13 . chapter 1As I already told you, I loved this idea. It was nice to see such an original story about such an eccentrically portrayed character. You made him human and likeable. I love the way you can take unknown characters and simply transition them into a story to make us feel as though we've always known them. This was great work, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done. |
 Gates Hepburn 2007-12-13 . chapter 1Very nice Cheile, I like how you have made Braxton a sympathetic character and not just the vengence crazed maniac that we saw later in the series. |
 Singing Violin 2007-12-13 . chapter 1What a unique POV. It's nice to see Braxton portrayed as nice - because of the time-bomb episode we've come to see him as mostly evil. I don't quite understand the bit about her descendants in the quadrant carrying on her legacy if she got home - but maybe he is talking about alternate timelines? Whatever it is, very sweet story. |