I liked how you used the actual names of specific regions. Interesting writing style you chose; I don't know how to describe it, just that it didn't seem your norm. I did find your descriptions of the emotions being fakes a tad repetitive, although the synonym usage there was far more clever then I could come up with, I'm sure. The italicized quotations added a somewhat... solemn air to the whole thing.

aww...he changed from a bad guy to a good one b'cause of Roxas...-squeals- one can only imagine how Axel was being a cold bloody killer once. o.0 that's...scary.

poor Axel... -cries- this totally fits the game. i'm going to show this fic to my friends who claim Roxas is with Namine and Axel's with Larxene. pfft! DDX 'He made me feel...like i had a heart.' isn't that obvious already? urgh..

the farewell part made me cried, hard. i think the title is 'Remembrance'. or so it says. really, it's touching. -sob- you made Axel's pov really good. thank you. XD how 'bout we both go kill Tetsuya Nomura? XP or at least made him change the ending.. XD

*cries* loves you axel! yea Minx ruined it for me i was so peeved when she said axel died so i found the clip on you tube.

in case you didn't notice i have decided to read almost all your stoires

i like your writting style and i think you somewhat brillant.

well that enough compliments for you. well done i really liked this.

*tears leak out of eyes*

ah yes, very sad indeed.

i would have sent a review earlier but my pc is broken and i bribed my older sister so i could go on her's.

Urgh! I wanna read this so bad but I don't wanna spoil the Final mix! so I just reviewed to say Hi, D lol what is Final Mix anyways? and Chain of Memories? I've been dying to find out! -_-

and I looked like..EVERYWHERE for them...whatever they are... _!

Aw, this was absolutely perfect in every way possible. Started out apathetic, changed a little, and then ended with sad and hopeful! And you had Axel so in-character it was scary - I've only read, like, one other story that's portrayed him so accurately. This is going on my favourites for sure.

I think I'm going to cry now. Axel's death scene was so sad! Why Nomura! WHY? -runs off crying-

-Kiki