WRITE A SEQUAL!

This was so so so so amazing. I love the angst stories but I can never find any when I want one. Please write a sequal of multi chapter length. Don't ask me why but I am almost begging you to write one. PLS DOOOOOOOO!

...wow...

There's so much raw emotion in this! Bravo!

so sad T_T

Oh look at all that ANGST! wow this was a awesome story! I feel bad for Danny and I love how you didn't end it with Danny just forgiving maddie like there wasn't any problem. I also love how you had maddie figure it out when she really looked at Danny and put aside all ignorance and hatred towards ghosts! All in all I loved this story and give it a 10/10!

D.O.P

It’s so sad!

I love this one-shot, I really do need some angst stories to read, it completely fits my mood... Anyways, great job!

You should continue this, I think that this could make for a great start to a story. I love how you showed Danny's emotions of how each word Maddie set ripped at his heart more and more. I felt so bad for him. Somehow, I think that it'll take more than a few sorries to make up for this.

yikes. that hurt. nice one shot and thank you for the comment about flaming lol

poor Danny. It really hurts for you mother to hurt you like that... it reminds me of what my sister has to go through...

Aw... so sad. :'( But deliciously angsty. Thanks for writing.

Wow, this was nicely written. I loved it. D Anything angsty, or random, is good for me, and this one fit the angsty category perfectly. )

Poor Danny.

IN FLAME (fire trick accidentally burns your story.) ops. Sorry. I liked it btw, but I just saw a HIMYM with fire tricks, and can't get over them, and it made me laugh.

wow thats really good! :]

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