This review better get through this time...

Wow. This is probably the second longest oneshot I have ever read. That poor scroll button has been horribly abused this time around.

I found it interesting how Rinoa played the part of Utena, as she isn't usually portrayed as the type of girl that does the rescuing instead of being the one saved. (And I have to say, I liked this version of her much better than FF8's.)

Selphie as Wakaba is perfect. You don't even need to change anything about the hyper girl. XD

"The other fighter revealed himself as a short boy with spiky blond hair. Covering one side of his face was a tattoo. Rinoa could not discern the design due to the distance between them."
You brought in the introduction of Zell, but Selphie never explained who he was as she did for Quistis. In the movie, Wakaba explains who Juri and Miki are, so I just found that a bit off. It's a minor thing, though, but I felt the need to mention it nonetheless.

Of course Seifer is going to be Touga. I totally expected that one. Ellone as Anthy, though? That was unexpected. And Raijin as Kyouichi? xD

Maybe you should have added a seperator to avoid confusion when you switched a scene. *your idiot is slow on the uptake when you do switch, so she likes to have some sort of signal*

I'm not entirely sure on how long I can actually make this review, so I'll cut it short. :)

Overall, the fic was a good read. But, and I know this is probably what you were aiming for, it got a little boring just reading characters in place of characters. In my opinion, because I know you can do this, you should have made the story more of your own...and split it off into chapters so people don't see it as such an intimitating read.

Looking forward to your updates and new stories, as usual!

Loves from your idiot,
Brandy