Learn to write ya sick fucktard.
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Loved this one as well...excellent and awesome as always!

Are you serious? Are you fucking serious? I cannot believe the stupidity of you and this so-called story. It is absolutely retarded, as are you my dear.

I was only half way through the second chapter and already despise this story, I cannot bear to read anymore. Guess what dear? Your characters are ALL Sues. MarySues are often self insert characters the author makes up to fulfill his or her fantasies. Those are exactly what your characters are and yes, there IS such thing as an OC who is not a marysue. REAL YuGiOh OCs can't turn into Cheetahs. Wanna know why? It. Is. Not. Possible. In. Yu-Gi-Oh.

I'm sure if I read the rest of your so-called fic, I could find more things to bash you about, but I can't bear to read another sentence. SO, instead, I'm just going to root around your profile for lulz.

You see, it seems as though you have this unwarranted self-importance. You see my dear, you are not intelligent, you are not a good writer, you are not a good artist, you are not special, get the fuck over yourself and face the truth, you are just another mentally retarded autistic.

"My stregths are that I'm imangative, open-minded, kindhearted, thoughtful and intellengent"

-You. (To back up my claim that you are not where near intelligent, a SMART person would not spell intelligent wrong.)

You say you are 20 years old, yet you draw, write, and spell worse than most 10 year olds I know.

You may think anime characters are more real, but that just tells me you need to leave your computer screen and go out into the real world. (And lose some weight too, fatty) There is nothing "real" about a kid with tri colored pointy hair with "speshul" powers.

Feel free to PM me and BAW about my flame, but it won't help anything. It will just give me more opportunities to flame you.

I'm betting you're not an english major.

I loved it. I give this story two thumbs up.

I almost forgot, you're so right about the song girl! you truewly are amazing! i mean you have such true morals and philosophy and i jjust admire you, finally someonw besides my freidns who understands me!
you're so right about faily and life! THta's why i love this songand i love phil collins i love the emaning in his ork and the vice and soul he puts in it!
This was such and aweosme story and you're an amazig writer, I'ma firm beeliver in individuality but you're right if eveyrone was mroe opena nd tolerant like us and understood thi philosphy like we and our friends do, than maybe this worls would be better. And you're so right my family is enormous, it's got my two familys, my blood realative and my sisters my ebst friend, Devin, who after two years of being my best friend/brother, him and i both finally cam clean about how we fell about eachother and we started going out and now i have no problem calling him my boyfriend and i'm letting anything happen to him or nina or catherine or any of my sisters and brothers. Friends and fmaily are everything and a life withouf love and fmaily is no life at all! This is an incredible story kelsey be proud of yourself and tell also those assholes and bitches who givr you shit to got F-- themselves and get a life, cuz you're aweosme and you're work has true meaning to it! I can't wait for you're next story which will be that novel of If my hart had wings you're doing that i know will be a hit. I'm gijg to oneonta and i'm gnan trye and get published, so be on the lookout, we're both making our dreams come true! keep going kelsey, the sky is never the limit!

Oh my god this was s awesome! what an incredible way to end the story with Jay and ari's wedding! i lvoe the vows they were so romantic! i love hasselberry and sy as the ebst men! and the rings were stunning! and i loved the myth behind them too. God i love romance!
that was so wonderful that EVERYONE was there! Talk about an awesome wedding party! that was so cool of everyone to use their magic to give them such an amazing wedding!
Terry and Blaze really are good together, i think you really made a strong point about transgenders in this that i'm personally proud of you for. and about hate crimes too.
XD, guys i suck at dancing, so you're in the clear. I'm glad yani and ace worked everything out. I loved the locket he gave her, it was so beautful, why can i never find this stuff!
I really dislike how you did chazz in this but oh well, too late now. perosnally i'm rather fond of chazz and he's not a big a jerk as everyone thinks he is, which annoys me to no end, it's like everyone thinking sy and yugi are weak and timid, when we all know that's BS.
Once again i'm so hppy yani and ace worked everything out and that they both get what they want. i understand the feeling, i'm going to collage which is two hours away and my boyfriend Devin is going to the community collage in town to build up his grades, but he wants to go into bussiness so i wanna convice him to come up to oneonta with me since it's got an awesome bussiness program too. and nina goes on about ho board she's gonna be without me ut i'm trying to help her get into Rockland Community which has an awesome art program so she can build up her math grade to get into this really awesome art and video game design school she wants to get into so she can major in character design, you've seen her stuff n deviant art as illusionalseasons, she's awesome!
i love seeing all the kids in this. that was so cute between ryo and aster. Looks like everyone's got plans in motion.
and maha and Mana were so awesome with all those awesome spells! studying wicca comes in handy!
That was an awesome game between everyone i was haivng os much fun! these guys are just like my family, when we all gte together we play games and have tornaments againts eachother all the time ans it's so much fun! you shoudk've seen my mom and aunt bianca beat uncle kenny and dad! it was great!
I loved seeing everyone enjoying themseves and just having so much fun after such a year! it was just so awesome!
Yami and yugi dueling again! this one's for the record books! i love those two!
XDXDXDBoys NEVER EVER underestimate a woman it just may be the last thing you do, just come over my house. and tea prooves my point! XDXDXD
oh my god that was so cute when the twins and the kiaba cousins kissed eachother! i was surprised kaiab didnt faint at how foreward his daughter was! but still it was so cute!
Oh! and i gotta tell you i remembered it the second i saw the lyrics! i knpw where you got the title! ot was a phil collins song! i knew it was from soemwhere but i didn;t know where until yetserday i finally got my laptop fixed, thank god! and was listieng to dongs on youtube and was listening to yugioh phil collins songs, and after listening to you'll be in my heart--my favorite i found it popped it, and knew i heard it before and knew in an instant and best of all it was a yuigoh video! and i just fell in love with ti! i was listeing to it all the day to day and than i saw this was updated i just had to bring it up! i'm listneing to it rigt now and just listeing to it reading this, it's just so awesome! exactly what i think of when i hear the song, and t was just what i needed to get my yugioh love back since my boyfirned gt me hooked on inuyasha this summer and i fell in lvoe with it, and of coursr i becoem obssesed with wht i love, but yugioh will always hold a speical palce in my heart that will never die, and it got me back into my writing tune! HALAyLUYA!

what the fuck is this shit

Yani dancing...? well you can be sure Ace was leading the whole time, with Yani blushing deeply in his arms...if you haven't already guessed Yani is not really a dancer. It's so cute. ...nearing the end of summer, Yani's one day closer to having to say goodbye and go home to China.

Grdcfuation day! awesome! I remembr what that feels like my grad party was a blast!
Hay birthday, uta! and haoppoy anniversary yami and yugi! taklk aboiut a party bash!
Oh mkann8've never seen kiaba so happy! it's so beautiful! I never saw kaiba as much a cook but since he riase himself and mokie it's no surpsie. I love how faer they've both come and how much better they both are. likei said it';s beautiful.
Look like thr kiaba family is even more beuatiful than it's been in years. Oh man she is so lucky@ i'd kill for a new bike! Kiaba;s out doen himself!
Awe!@ they all amde gifts for yam and yug's anniversary.
Anniversdaru in egypot that's beautiful and romantic. Yrah i'll bet everyone is thrilled to see thier pharophs again.
Awe Az, she';s so sweet, she really is. I loce this family it's so beuatiful and sweet.
Love conquers all!
look like thr schoosl gettin reaxdy for prom, and graduation! summer's rolling around! poor joei love is in thr air, and she wants to be with Syrus, it sucks being a miner doesn;t it.
i agree i admit i support soem age limits(like i dissaporive of a twenty soemthign woman marrying aman old enought to be her grandfather) but unforutnatly laws make things up to oprevent kids that are two young from doing soemthing stupid they might regret(like hacing sexz too early)
still i can;t help but feel for joei. Thwe only reaosn i wnret o my prom was so i could wear the dress i cought and i hate dresses, i had much more fun at banquate with all my freidns thought was bummed my unoffical boyfriend Devin didn't go.
poor joei, don't think like that girl, sy loves you no matter wehat, ya think he'd do allt he death defying stuff he does if he didn't? love is such a complex and complicated thong, trust me on that!
Looks like th cuzes are having soem love issues of thier own. I really like how you did Terry qnd blaze's relationshop, you really made a strong point, i agree i'd be a little off if i was dating a transgender too, but it still woudln't chane the way i feel, thoguht it might bring up some sexuality issues thought it might easy to assuje you're bi and end it. whatever, i hope ace and yani can work thinga out what with her going back to china and all. persoanlyl i dislike china only cuz of the limits of children they have and how they just throw away girls! it's sickening.
the orince and orincess of games dishin it out that sounds aesome! poor joie's on such an emotional ride with her romance life.
It's ohenomenal to see libra hapy and smiling as ever. Thasnk goodness she deserves to be happy, afte the hell she went through.
wow prom is really hitting it off!
Whaoh! sy and joei decided to come! holy cow i didnlt see that coming! Wow she loks good2 that dress reminde me of my prom dress, expect mine was scarlet red, my favorite color!
Haooy birthday joie! guess he got her wish after all! yeah i'm with her i hate dresses yert i fell in lvoe with my rpom dress! i hope it's that easy to choose a wedding dress if i ever get married.
Awe thatbwas such a beautiful scene between lkibrya ansd maverick, i knew they'd get together!@ they're so good for eachother! this so romantic it's beautiful!
Graduation day rocked! I loved yami and yuig's speech! Teuley inspirational!
Sweet'; joei's valadixctorian! awesome! oh yeah what a year they had! life, love, fires, hate crimes, love, trust, relaitonships, borken hearts, rekindled love and passions and family it was all incredible! Summer is gonna eb amazing too! is this the last chaoter or will they're be more! i hope so! i'm, looking forewardf to whatever else is gona throw it's way at these kids! This is wonderful kelsey it truely is!

you got this up fatser than I expected, no compkaints though. Sorry i didn;t respond to your sneek peek. I'm still a novice on devainstart and every time i tried to open the note it just took me to the note page (ugh!)
anyway i loved this chapter, title and i coudln't wait to read, thank god that hell is over and best of all Libra is finally free from hr bitch sister and if her and her SOB husband aren't put away foe life for all the crimes they've commited i ahve completel lost all faith in our judical system.
oh man poor maha, what's up with all those freaky nightmares? god take it form a girl who literaly lives in her dreams nghtmares are th worst.
poor maha, i really hope nothing bad happens. i really like how we get to see her in this chaoter and how she has a center focus as well, your defiently well rounded with your characters in this story.
Oh my god i love stardust! my sister, mom and i saw the movie! it was wonderful!
awe scarab's so cute!
Xd, wow their mornings are crazier than my family's! XD. seems the ishtars have settled down nicely into Domino.
Awe man that is scary...and worst of all all the kids have special powers, could you imagine the damange comeonw could do with ALL their powers!
imlove how they
re all taking about the possibility of impending doom, and seymour and Z.Z are being all mushy, XD.
I don't think prom is over rated, i went ot both my junior prom and my senior banquet andn i perosnally enjoyed both and i ahte dresses and fancy parties, thought i went to banquet cuz all my frieds were there and we had a blast, btu it hink i only went ot prom as an excuse to wear that gorgeosua dn daring red dress i got that i kepy and am going to wear again. though since joie is a bigger tomboy than i am i can understand why she doesn't wanna go.
Xd poor joie thatbstinks about the age difference between her and Sy, but yeah it sucks being a miner cuz of all thw dub laws, like in NY they made it a law that in major malls underaged kids can't be in the mall with out an adult past five or six, it's stupid! lucky for me my friends and i lied saying we were 18 when i was seventeen and nina was 16 (her birthday's in december) good news Devin's a year older than the both of us.
oh yeah uta's bithday is in may, that's alos yami and yugi/s anniversary! Squeal!
isn;t 11 little young to be kissing on the lips, i mean yeah these kids love eaxhother but i keep forgetting the twins are only ten cuz they act so much older than they resly are.
I can;t wait for Jay and Adi's wedding!
perosnally i'd say roses cuz they're my favorite flower but orchis are more original. plus roses are like the most common cymbol of love and passion there is.
this sis so funny watching he boys go on and on about flowers, whao! i knew knew aster was such a romantic, lucky ry.
sounds like everything is going on! awesome, everyone's busy as heck.
Oh my god i love that song! i have your sister to thank for that!
awe girls, you don't have to go to prom with a date, that's just for fun, i went by myself and spent the whole night with my friends and i loved it!
wait ruth's fourteen? and she's in love with hasselberry? i got nothing with it, but keep in mind hasselberry's only a year younger than jay and sy, so he's like nine years older than her? oh well i know people were there's a ten-year difference and they love eachother deeply.
man there's so much going on and i love how sisterly azizia and adi are, they;re like me and my sister, thought we fight like hell and she ciritzies me like there's no tomorrow, i love her to tears.
god bless terry's parents and thnak god the twins are alright.
i'll say thank goodness that hell is over for bth libra ans aziza. go thing mokie and becky own a foster care.
ari as long as you're with the man you love and you get the kiss of true love at the end you've add the perfect wedding i look at my parents wedding pictures and see how happy they are despite the hard times and just hope i can have that.
now they';re acting there age! they're lucky when i was 8 i had to go to bed at 7, it wasn;t until after jim an i complainaed that we got out bed times moved now we go to bed at ten but we're up until we wanna sleep.
Oh my god it was Phaorh's village! who the hell woudlw ant to burn it down! Oh god i hope the gangs alright! thi is NOT happening!
oh my god that was terrifying, thank god these kids hve magical powers!
oh my god the kids looked awesome in those regent outfits! so wicked!
oh my god ace is so brave! he must really love her if he fan into a burning buiding dam wehre wer you when i was struggling my breains out to write ascene where the kids were trying to find and save echothe rin the middle of a burning room! talk about irnoy!
oh my god! jaden ari! Z.z is the bravest girl i[ve ever met! that was terrifying! thank god everyonw is alright, man maha;s vision saved so many lives!
I can;t blame there parents for freaking out, if i ran into a burning building my mother would never let me leave my room again. XD yeah that IS good leverage, but i can defiently see their parents view, they're parents the most terrifying thing in the world is loosing thier children.
oh yeah they're getting grounded.
Phew thank god evryone's alright, hoepfully the village will be back up soon, i wonder ehat happened to start theat fire?
Awesome chapter!!1 that was incredible!

I’m so sorry kelsey, my house lost power last night and my internet was down, so when I went to send that heartfelt review sent you it couldn’t be displayed and got deleted! I was devastated, but because you are so important to me and that chapter was pure gold I refused to leave it alone so I will try to recreate that review to he best of my ability:
First off, I wasn’t expecting this chapter to be updates so soon but I was happy for, I though my heart broke while reading the title I swear I started to cry and I hadn’t even begun the chapter!
Nice to see everyone enjoying the picnic, the park sounds gorgeous by the way. Awe maverick and libra those too are so cute and perfect together, they really bring out the best in the other don’t they?
Nice to see uta back on her feet and that her and her father have rekindled their bond. Jay’s so good to her, they’re so cute together. Woah! Awesome trick Seymour! Even Z.Z liked it!@ keep it up buddy! Mavrick’s on the boxing team? That’s awesome! My nest friend Cat boxes with her dad all the time. Poor libra, she really should tell her secret, her friends woulldn’t think and differently of her, how can they blame her for her faimily’s sins? Big difference between aqua and kiaba, aqua ia a bitch in every sens of the word, kaiba was just a misunderstood teen who went though hell in the past and wanted nothing more than to move on and forget it but wound up beng trapped in it. Though I hate her I really do wonder why aqua and her husaband ae the way they are. It’s in my nature to assume all people are naturally good at heart but seeing them and watching law and order and the sickening crimes that’s been committed can’t help but make me rethink my philosophy.
Wow libra’s house is beautiful! Stunning really, the perect mask of the sin and darkness that goes on within, quite ironic actually dear god they’ve even got this crap plastered all over they’re house! Wat is the matter with them! I stand by you and azizi, love is love doesn’t matter what for it’s in and in the words of the pope: god is love! I firmly belive if god isn’t want transgenders and homosexuals he wouldn’t have created them and is disgust me how people hypocritically discriminate other in the name of god and how appalled he must be that;s they’d do such! God I\is love and I stand by the firm belief that he loves all it doesn’t matter what their race, creed, sexuality, ethnicity, skin color, etc. and I live with two religious grandparents, though I confessed my beliefs to my grandpa and he agrees wholeheartedly, he was even theone to told me god is love!
Don’t give in libra, you can makes a difference, in the words of Galadrial of lord of the rings or Tolken even the smallest person can change the course of the future and you’e gonna change the word with your philosophy libra and shut that bitch up!
Hell one of my close firend annis a self0admiteed lesbian and she’s one of the sweetest girls I’ve me and her and her girlfriend aren’t afraid to hold hand in public and admit who they are, and know they will encounter both those who approve and have nothing against it and those who aren’t so open-minded, one of the things I admire about her.
Sweet the duel club dance sounds like fun and everyone’/s having a blast setting up!
HAPPY 18 BIRTHDAY BLAZE! Swwet now him and me are the same age, though I’m march 11 as you already know which reminds me, my granny, my uncle steve my cousin kell and my mom’s birthday is this month, and this Friday is my parent’s 21st anniversary!
Woah! Holy crap what happened to the posters! Oh shit I have a feeling something bad is gonna happen… oh shit ti’s temisn;t it! Aqa and taurs they’re the one who are did this! Oh shit they’re the ones who hurt Z.Z and Jay too I’d bet my laptop!
OH MY GOD! WHAT HAPENED! THSE BEAUTIFUL POSTERS AD BANNERS! How dare they! Those poor art kids! They must be so upset, as a pat artists and my best friend nina is an aristus and even if one of those was hers she’d be devastated, her heart is everything to her! Who would do this! What the hell am I saying its; the bitch(aqua) and her bastard husband of course! Those freakin asses! Oh I can’t wait to see the slap on there faces when instead of going to heaven they got straight to hell when they croak and satan is laughing hi ass off at his toys (look at this they even have Me getting upset)
Smart move by joey calling their parents and adults, parents always know what’s bst hopefully jaden, shepard and the gang can help out.
Oh crap what now…OH MY GOD THOSE FREAKs! I KNEW T! The bitch and the ass are the only ones who’d stop this low and I swear to god I’ll neve right again if I’m worng! How dare they do they do that duel club! What I the matter what them, god damn the eternal question! Unity and diversity are god’ grestest gifts, secnd only to love and hope and I don’t givr a damn how cory it sounds it’s the truth! I salute those kids! Hate-crime, thr most sinful crims of all, god mary and the angls in heaven must ebigncrying there eyes out, I’m on the verge of tears!
But I honor those kids and their courage and determination. They’re not gonns let hate-crimes and close-minded bitches and ASSHOLES get hem down! Nice to see the dance was a success and what a blast! It was truly awesome!
Ae and yani are cute together I love aces’ and yani’s back story, my mom grew up in the city for a while too with her family untilthey moved to ridwood, much cleaner and safer. Personally I ahte the city, especially new York cit, I prefer boston, it’s cleaner, greener, mosr hystrorical, and greener, not to dis cities or city lover,s but growing up in the country and suburbs and being a nature lover, envrioment nut and greenpeace like me, it’s only natural I’d dislike the city.
Awe poor yani’s homesick. Good thing ace is there to comfort her. Homesickness is the worst. yani’s going back to china? Poor ace, and I can understand his hesitation though, as a girl about to enter collage I can understand how hard it is to be so far from home, and I’m just not ready to leave my home just yet, even I wouldn’t gt more than an hour or two from home. I really hope they stay together tand they work out, you never now? When my grandpa met nany and got her number and called her she was in Italy! Then months later they met up again! Coinscidence? Hell no, god knows what he’s doing.
Glad to see the dance was a success…
(SCREAMS AND BURST INTO TEARS, TO TH POINT YHR MAGICANS IN MY DECK AND THE DUEL SPIRIT IN MY ROOM BUSRT TO LIFE TO CRY WITH ME!) JAY! Z.Z! OH MY GOD WHAT THE HELL! PLEASE GOD, RA IN THE NAME OF EVERYTHING YOU’RE KNOW BY PLEASE LET HTME BE ALRIGHT AND PLEASE LET THE ONES WHO DID THIS TO THEM BE CAPTURED AND BROGUHT TO JUSTICE! MY GOD THAT’S..THAT;S…INHUMAN, NO even that’s too gentle a world, to describe this monstrocity! It’s pure evil! My god they’re’s so much blood at the message! Thse cowards! Those bloody, fucken cowards!
Poor seynou and uta I coudln;t image what mustve been going through they’re minds seeing they’re lover hurt like that! And they’er parents! My god, poor yug, atem and Aziza, I can’t even begin to imagine what they must be going through and they’re family’s. even though I as one I remember how scared my mom was when my brother jimmy got meningitis when he was only four months old and ow furious she was when she left to got the bathroom and came out to hear him screaming cuz the nurses were doing stuff to him! Needless to say mom was pissed!
Oh my god I’m in tears right now! I can’t imagine the pain everyone must beign going through, I could feel the paina dn tension in that hospital room and I was cryjg with everyone! Poor atem, poor yugi! Poor aziza! I don’t blame atem and Az for being upset but yugi’s right if they give into their hatred, theyn theyre no bettee than the ones who hurt them, and we all know yami would rather loose yugi and beign trapped for ever in eternal torment of the shadows than go through with that! I can understand the tensions and argurments between the three though, even I’d be upset. It took the twins to make them stop, nice move with turning into cheetah;s and poucing on them. At least the time in Egypt helped them calm down.
I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT! I KNEW IT WAS THOSE BASTARDS I KNEW IT! WA TO GO LIBRA! I TOLD YOU YOU”D CHANGE THE WORLD! I knew her frieds wouldn’t rat her differently if they knew her secrte, she did the right thing going to the motuos and telling them he truth. And finally the btich and batard are in jail nd it’s not just hate crime which alone gets atleasr a decadein prison, it’s also attempted murder to two miners, child endangerment of everyone in Pharoph yugi institure, areson, property damage, child abuse I could go on and I know my grandpa is a lawyer! The only I’m disappointed in was that we didn’t see the trail in which the bitch and bastard got put away I would love to smirk in their faces and hear aqaua screaming as libra testifys and shuts her up! Take that bitch!
But thank godQ the bitch and ass are out away fro their sins, Jay and Z.z are alive and well, thank god and Libra is finally free form her abusive bitch sister and her Son of a devi;’s bitch husband ans we all know rose will be a good guardian! See libra I told you could change the world.
Amen to the last sentence in my opinion. Fnally linra can bring light to her name, though technically with her parents and the bitch and ass in jail, when libra and maverick et married, she’ll become and Ishtar and the afterglow line of corruption will be dead forever. In you’re face bitch! (aqua ofcourse)
This was an incredibly chapter Kelsey and you should be proud of youself. This chapte broke my heart and out it back together I haven’t cried this much before ever! Well I have but still, whole reading! You’ve proven the sins and evils of hate crime and shown the true strength of courage love and trust and the power of family andf hope and proved the real family is the one who loves you and you don’t have to be blood to be family, in the words of my friend Devin, me, nina, shawn and his freidns are his second family. This was incredibly and I love the meaning behind this chapter. You should be profu od youself Kelsey and ignore the idiot close-minded asses, and delete their idiotic reiews they don’t deserve to have their name on you’re review list let alone on fanfiction.

I have to say that Ace is being really sweet, but I wondering how he's going to take when Yani goes back home to Hong Kong, after all she is an exchange student for one year, then it's back home, I bet she is getting a little homesick...she loves her family very much.

hey girl, sorry i haven't gotten to chapter S yet, school's been hell i had a research project in english questions and stuff for french we've been dong project none stop for econimis and we've got finals and projects for the next two weeks, plus i've been filling out job interviews, and i'm a beta reader so i've been betaing for my friends Karatejules, midnightmaurader, and theworldisquare, but i promise if nt tomorroe than this week or next weekend i will read it.
i knew mmedietly this was the chapter about Uta and the hardships her and her father go through, and i was listening to Animal I've become on my brother's three day's grace CD too (love the band). i was a little dissapointed we didn't see yami-chan's birthday though
loved how it started with uta kicking butt at motercross! perosnally i'm more of a mountain biker. That rocks that the gang's her pit crew, Hawkeye's her couch, maverick's the mechanic(that's perfect in all the right ways), and Maha handles the merchanidise.
i don't blame seymour for worrying about her, i remmeber before we move across town, when my little twin bros were three/four and they were copying jimmy' pop-wheelieys on thier bikes, they were pridigies in that, but i was nine and they were THREE! and we had a small trench we called the creek all around the place. XD wow maverick really knows what he's doing. sorry Uta but you won't be handleing 250 for a while. i cracked up when maverick plucked a calculator out of his pocket, i man how on cue was that!
THat jealous bastared! I mean i've heard of bitter rivarly, but Wessie is a creep! how dare he insult her like that just becuase he's a jealous sore-loser! Ugh! i can;t STAND people like that!
and how dar he insult her and seto like that! i mean yeah seto has an attitude and he's stubborn, but he's still a good guyat heart, and he loved uta and kisera and mokuba more than anything, he;d throw everything awayn in a heartbeat for them!
and he's a coward, like bob ewel in to kill a mocking bird (onw of my favorite books) if he's got a prbolem with kiaba he should sya it to his face like a an instead of threatening his daughter like a coward! and it hurts! that's worst of all, Aziza in IMHHW was right, physical wounds heal, but words scare the heart and the mind and that abuse his far worse than anything phsycial!
(except maybe rape, but--thank God.Ra.allah. what ever you call him,--i've never been so, so i can;t speak for those who have but i pray i never do, or anyone i care about, i've seen SVU and what haitus actions happen).
i was cheerin maverick when he told that bastard to shut up! good thing uta's got her friends to help her out. Friendship, true friendship is the greatest git in the world, i have four ultraclose friends, my best freinds Nina, Catherine and Devin, and they are always there for me and i can be myself for them i know they would do anything for me, espeically Devin, if that ass said that stuff to me, he would've have left in one piece, he'd have a nice bloody nose or a black eye. Devin's the sweetest guy in the world but he;s fiercly protective of his firend and NO ONE hurts them in anyway way as gets away with it. Thankfully, i make him promise to stay out of trouble.
poor uta, kaiba loves her that's a fact but it's heard being the ower of a multi-billion dollar company, my parents both work very good jobs and i still hrdly get to spend time with them except on weekends. still kaiba needs to make more of an effort, you can;t just expcet somoenw to go all the way(and i'm not talig about THAT) on thier own, you have to meet them halfway.
I didnt blame Uta for being upset, though i think it was a little harsher than intended, and kisera shoudln't have just sat there, i mean my parents fight like hell all the time, when dad or mom loose thier temper but when it comes to us neither of them just sit there cowering. I like how she retreated to music, that's waht i do whenever i'm upset. (i will not die was playing over and over while reading this part, love how the music seems to fit what's happening). though i think kaiba's head is way to big for his shoudler, i didn;t blema him for being furrious, my dad would've thrown a fit if i did what uta did. so in a realistic sense his anger was justified, but i'm not saying uta was the only one wrong, kaiba needs to get his act together, and fast, before someon gets hurt...big time!
i liked kaiba and kisera's argument, even the most loving couple in the world argue soemtimes, i looks at my parents and thought the fight like hell, i can only hope i ind a love as strng as there one day. but yeah kaiba needs to deflate that insane ego of his, though in my perosnal opinion you went overboard, yes kaiba is arrogant, but he's no where nears this selfish, as i said those he loves, and i mean truely loves after the hell he was forced to go through to protect mokuba, he'd never let anything happen to what he loves, like in Enter the shadow realm when noah forced him to choose between defeating him to win his company and killing mokuba to do so, he choose saving mokuba in a heartbeat with no regrets, and don;t you dare say it's because you're suppose to love and protect you're family cus thats crap, yes it's how it SHOULD be but it's not how it always is, my best friend loved her father but "hates" her mother because of the hell she but her throuhg in childhood, my other friend ahs frieds who'se parents abuse them, i lost a friedn because he hit rock bottom afte being taken away from an abusive father, you see parents trying to control and force they're children to be what they wanna be, and you have siblings who hate eachother have you ever read Fruits Basket, if you havent gte to the manga section of the boom store and buy. it's incredible and it's living proof of what i'm talking about, maybe it's cuz i really like kaiba despite his ego, ot my firm beleife in the goodness in people or my strong attraction and knowledge of characterixation and development in everything i love reading, eatching whatever, but yeah.
poor uta, home life is hell and now the asses at school are being bigger asses. Finally aster gave them detention! thry SO desrrved it and they won;t win so i hpe they get stuck scrubing toilets in th boy's locker room!
i liked her sercet lace, everyone needs a small safe place; a sancutary. yeah put all the blame on that son f a bitch gozoboro, literally THE biggest bsatrd on the planent in the history of the world!
OH MY GOD! Uta NO! i ecpected this, but still! cutting yourself is NOT the answer, it only leqd to more pain! poor uta! blue eyes would never abandon her! he's just dorment cut of her pain, she'l linked to him.
honestly i'm not surprised she got grounded, but that was way too harsh.
Uta needs to wake up! he dragons; trying to tell her to stop, its hurting because of what she's doing ot her self and kaiba needs a serious reality check! and now she's taking out her anger by destroying kaiba's company to make her happy, but it's backfiring in all the wrong ways!
looks like kaiba cares about others more than she thought. kaiba's even swallowing his prde and asking atem for help.
at least jay's wised up to get her to talk. Jay di the right thing telling everyone what uta's been up too. she may be mad at him but he did the right thing, she neds help whether she likes it or not!
That sucks, kaiba finally deflates his ego and uta tries to commit suicide. SEE I KNEW IT! I KNEW deep down kaiba was good person, and that he loved uta more than anything. I gotaa say its a good thing he can hold his cool insituation, my parents would faint if they foudn me like that!
good thing bakura' her therapist. its better to get you anger out instead of keeping it all bottle up inside. that hurts more than th deepest cut. I think bothe her andh kaiba go a reality check in this. Poor seto, no wonder he broke all th mirrors and glass he probably felt so disgusted with himself to look in a mirror. But like i said i always knew kiaba had a heart he just needed to see that and unfortunatly it took soemthing this horrific to do so. it's true what they say, you never know how precious something is until you loose it, or almost loose it, i lerned that the hard way when my great grandmother died. but in retrospect it helped me grown and mature into the woman i am today and was the biggest turning point in y life. This is kiaba's.
looks like the4 long road to atonement is about to begin, but like i said before they;re both rrd to make amends halfway, remembering all those pcitures you drew for this only makes everything come to life een more. i loved the end, kaiba and uta embracing eachother in a hertfelt hug and the dragon they both love and how loves them both smiling ovherad, i thibnk i cried during this chapter, it was incredible, i'm so glad they both managed to work things out, this was the biggest step they've ever taken, but oce again love and hope overcomes the darknesa and hate. I quote: love is the most powerful emotion in the world, it is the only thing that can cause true pain, and it is also the only thing that can take that pain away. Uta's hate wasn't acutal "hate" it ws routd because she loved her father so much she forced herslef to hate him to heal her own pain, just as kaiba forced himself into denile becuase he couldn't accept the fact that the very monster he eared becoming was ctually happening, yet they both came though it, this was a truely heartwrenching and heartwarming chapter. and i cant wait for more, unforutnatly, the trouble's not over for our heros just yet...

I love Kisara, especially her relationship with Seto, I wish they could have continued it, I guess in a weird way they did...which means...woah...Kaiba's into beastiality...woah okay rewind, too much information for me...another great chapter! Can't wait to hear the next update on Yani!