Oh, Hell yeah, first season Pokemon was the stuff. In elementary school, they had the VHS of that episode and they played it for us all the time in the auditorium, meaning of course I recognized the story! Beautifully incorporated with our Jack and Chase. I want to print this story and hang it up somewhere -- it just deserves some form of honor. I don't know, but the story, Ghost of Maiden’s Peak, has always had a place in my heart, and you just added to the greatness. c:

OMG!! I LOVE THIS! THAT IS SO SWEET! ^-^ ADORABLE!

Sweet. Naturally, Jack would continue to wait, even in death.

wow, sad, but i liked it

O.o

I am deeply disturbed that I remember first season pokemon episodes in such detail... or at all, really. Gosh, that was so long ago...

Anyway, great premise. You truly put your own spin on it; very adorable. And, well, it's pretty hard to screw up Chack. Those two were born sexy.

>_< I bet that episode is old enough to be on youtube... *sneeks off to watch*

-SS

God...that is just so utterly beautiful. I applaud you!

aw

I thought this was lovely.
I've seen that episode! XD *laughs* I knew it was familiar... It also reminds me of an episode from DNAngel... *shrug*
Lovely, it was sweet. And I liked how you brought the story into the future as well... Plus the climax was lovely!
Cheers,
RG

Beaitiful, beautiful and so romantic ^^