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TheyCallMeCyclone 2008-11-30 . chapter 7
Is this done? If not can you update. Its very rare to find such a well written story on a fanfiction website, especially for Seamus/Dean.


Continue please
Aquila Corax 2008-08-20 . chapter 7
o...i like it. ;} very good job, especailly with the conflict-y-ness. here's to hoping you update soon. Tah!
Silver Mirror 2008-05-08 . chapter 7
Awsome work! Love chap 7 the best of course! You really make this couple seem real in a way I never read before! ( =
Squibakou 2008-05-01 . chapter 7
thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, you've really brought forward how they feel, and the awkward yet familiar atmosphere adds a level of realness to the storyline.
Kneazlekit 2008-04-29 . chapter 7
I had to re-read this chapter many times before I could manage to be sedated enough to write this reply. This has to be one of my all-time favorite Deamus stories. You write them as such intensely -real- people. So many authors forget that boys are, well, boys. They argue, they insult, they fight, and they tend not to understand certain things while understand others right away. I love the way you right them as best friends and as lovers, showing that easy-going relationship of best mates, something they fall into so easily, slowly becoming something more and something each deems fragile but overwhelming. I also love the fact that this whole process of getting them together was a struggle from both of them. Dean trying so hard to figure himself out through Luna and the unnamed boy of his holiday. Seamus trying to reevaluate his life in these new terms that he hadn't ever really thought of before. Each being frightened and not everything running smoothly, but both of them willing to try this new thing.
And I'm rambling like nobody's business, but I must say I adore your story. It was one of the ones that inspired my Daughter Of Mine series.
Many happy writings!
-kit
Munchkin91 2008-04-29 . chapter 7
I was wondering when you were going to update again! But it was worth the wait. I knew Seamus would come (ha) around. Looking forward to more. I'm wondering how their relationship will work out. They've been friends for so long, I'm curious to see how everything will work out.
-munchkin
Sophia Lobato 2008-04-29 . chapter 7
Oh wow!

Never imagined this couple, but enjoying them immensely though.

=D
TheRavenclawNinja 2008-04-29 . chapter 7
That was HOT. Their relationship is so masculine (I mean that in a good way)and you write it very well, getting all of Dean's feelings across in a very true but absoloutly gorgeous way. The part about the zebra was pretty funny, by the way. Update soon!

Nora xx
ProtegoNox 2008-04-28 . chapter 7
Have I mentioned that I really enjoy this pairing? I do, absolutely. I've always been stuck on the whole 'best friends falling in love' plot. :)
So huzzah for another chapter! I like how they're both hesitant and confidant in what they want, or how to get it. We never really get a good look at either of them in the books (just like most of JKR's fantastic characters), but they fit perfectly with how I imagined Seamus and Dean to be.
See you next chapter!
Kneazlekit 2008-03-28 . chapter 6
Now that deserved to be the first DeanSeamus I've read. Very lovely my dear. Luna and Dean are very perfect and so are Dean and Seamus. I just love it.
Fred kissed George 2008-03-15 . chapter 6
Aww...
TheRavenclawNinja 2008-03-05 . chapter 6
THAT. WAS. AMAZING. I loved it. A lot.
iluvmcr487 2008-01-28 . chapter 6
OMG this story is so great!
WitchofOz 2008-01-02 . chapter 6
I have read most of your stories and I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed every singe one (I will get to individual comments some day, I swear) and this one is no exception.

I am very impressed with your fresh style and control of diction. I love how you have executed the intimacy. I did not read the pairing before I began reading and so I felt the buildup was very gradual and lovely. I sincerely hope you will continue this story soon, I'm very invested. Lovely character depictions, as always.

Please update!
Woz
littlejohnny.lj 2007-12-22 . chapter 2
I like the way you've portrayed Dean and Seamus' feelings and Dean's reaction to Ted's death. Can't wait to read more.
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