This was beautiful, and I think you chose wisely in keeping it short, otherwise the mood and message would have been ruined.
It's sweet and just...fantastic.
Great job.

beautiful, simply beautiful

I absolutely loved this fic. You capture Zelgius' sense of loyalty very well.
I really liked the tone of this piece, and how the angst along with the sense of fulfilment as he dies, content in the fact that he has done all he can for Sephiran.

Overall, excellent work!

Ahh... That was so well written, I cried. *sobs* Oh, WHY do you have to die, Zelgius! If only you had just SURVIVED... Sephiran's arms would be waiting always!

...Sorry. But it was so good, this story. I wish there was more Zelgius x Sephiran fics...

I honestly don't understand how I haven't once noticed any of your fanfics on here before. From what I've seen in this fanfic here, you've some pretty awesome writing skills. And what could possibly make that better? The fact that this is a SephiranZelgius fanfic, one of my favorite pairings in FE 10 (which definitely deserves more love)! Of course, it also seems you write about other pairings that I absolutely adore.

Anyway, awesome fic. This completely captures Zelgius's emotions, and for once it seems like everything is perfectly in character. I completely look forward to reading other works by you in the future, as well as looking back at some of your previous ones (OscarKieran, ahoy!)

I love Zelgius so much. So so so very wonderful. His emotions, his solitude, his fullfilment while fighting Ike...seriously, I love you and you wonderful writing skills.

SethCormagSethCormagSethCormag!

Request something! Now! (please!)

Hey, my e-mail is receiving messages again! I accidently put the address on by blocked list!! Joy!

Whee, I love this pairing. This is a good fic, it really captures how devoted Zelgius is...was. Oh crap, I just made myself sad. T_T Moving on, great job!

Reviewing epic first Sephiran/Zelgius of the FE boards!

It is kinda short, but it captures a very strong sense of love towards Sephiran.

Although one quick question: I assume that you've played through Radiant Dawn, but just in case:


MASSIVE SPOILERS


What do you make of Zelgius offering to take Micaiah up to see Sephiran in part 4-3? With Zelgius's dual identities, it is hard to make anything truly definite about him, save his devotion to Sephiran.

Me, I personally think that he wanted to show Sephiran that the first born of the former Apostle was actually alive and well, to at least try and get Sephiran to start feeling compassion for the world again before he was commited to actively fighting Yune's group. Anything about Sephiran's true feelings for all of the Apostles and their relatives, those are second playthrough spoilers, and I bite my tongue.

END SPOILERS

Keep it up!

Was there any doubt that this would be amazing? You really should have an ego; I'm glad that, from what I've seen, you don't.

*WIBBLE*

That was perfect. Just perfect.