love it please keep writing!!

Plz, give me more!

I loved this chapter.

OMG!! I freakin loved that chapter!! I have loved all of this fanfic!! :D It's so great! I left you reviews on edwardandbella[.]net and I hope you update this story!! Please finish it!! :)

OMG! I'm so glad it's posted here on !! I read this fanfic on edwardandbella[.]net a few months ago and I was hoping you would continue posting more chapters! I'm so glad I found it on here because I love it!! :D I posted reviews on that site under the name 21Twilight21 and I love it! I'm going to read the next chapters! I just wanted to tell you that because I got so excited lol!

this is an amazing story! it's unique interesting intriguing great and blah blah blah u fill in the blanks! :)

Well, I think Bella is being stupid here and sanctimonious as usual. I would warn her to watch out for her own hubris...that it may get her in trouble. What is really essential to her? I am disappointed with Bella in her disloyalty to Edward. He doesn't deserve that.

plz keep going!

when was the last time you updated? doesn't look so recent! :/
please continue it! this is one of the only incomplete stories i have read. it would feel like such a waste to read 28 chapters and then not finish the story. this story was beyond amazing. oi couldn't stop it what so ever. you are definitely a talented writer. you kept me so interested. but please continue it. i can't bear to think that such a wonderful story would go to waste. bella and edward had sex hehe.

when does this story take place?
where were they before they came to the tanya's?

Did they have sex ever? At times I feel like it is hinted in the story but it was never straight out said.

Oh my gosh...I absolutely loved this story. It's genius.

" not yet " :D

Darn it! I wanted Edward to change her! Argh!

[shriek]
Graet chapter! I know what you mean about the story jsut unfolding without a plan. But this one had much better results than mine!