to use "it" for the Pleasure of Noah...What a great idea !!

bravo.

Awwh, poor Allen )': you did really well at writing this ^^ Especially near the end xx

You know, I think out of all of them, Kanda and Allen have come the closest to Death each time, but I think Allen`s are the worst since Kanda never actually lost an entire LIMB before. And, you know, the whole `hole in the heart`deal ^_^

I always felt bad for those guys, and I think you depicted Allen`s thoughts extremely well.

Hugs for Allen-kun. Puches for Tiki-san. I don't remember getting a notic for this one. It's so good! Like everything else that you write. I don't know how you do it. I love your stuff.

I am awed, really like the presence if Mana here in the story. The despair and horror of what Tyki was doing made me shudder, good job.

I was almost visibly shuddering.

You're very descriptive with the torture, it managed to creep me out sufficently. And possibly the music I had in the background helped that feeling...

I liked the ending, but I feel like the beginning took some of the feeling from it...

I'll reread it again later... mentally prepared next time. ^^;

Oh my god. That was so well written...I really almost cried. There's probably something you can imporve on, I just can't find it. I hope I can become as good of a writer as you are.

Amazing. Allen T_T. Great work, I loved it, so sad!

Tyki is so horribly wonderful. I love your descriptions of his hands and his unique ability; very gripping.

Poor Allen, I should take such joy in his suffering - but he does it so well and you get it across so nicely. The bit with Mana was particularly nice.

Though, Allen noticing his hat and Tyki's matched was one of my favorite details.

Omfg. That was fn amazing. Im not exactly sure what u mood u were in but if it doesnt depress u then i wish u were in that mood when u write stories more often. I really did love it, i've always wanted for tht situation with tykki to b redone to something like this. I dont even remember what i wanted to say nxt... Oh, I think it was something like i wouldnt mind no updates for Cross if i got oneshots like this! d-(^.-)z

Omfg. That was fn amazing. Im not exactly sure what u mood u were in but if it doesnt depress u then i wish u were in that mood when u write stories more often. I really did love it, i've always wanted for tht situation with tykki to b redone to something like this. I dont even remember what i wanted to say nxt... Oh, I think it was something like i wouldnt mind no updates for Cross if i got oneshots like this! d-(^.-)z

Omfg. That was fn amazing. Im not exactly sure what u mood u were in but if it doesnt depress u then i wish u were in that mood when u write stories more often. I really did love it, i've always wanted for tht situation with tykki to b redone to something like this. I dont even remember what i wanted to say nxt... Oh, I think it was something like i wouldnt mind no updates for Cross if i got oneshots like this! d-(^.-)z

Wow...I thought this was going to become an Allen rape fic. xD I loved it though and I'm immensely ecstatic that I knew what floating ribs were without looking it up. Yay for Anatomy class. x] Great story as usual and keep up the great work! =D

Amazing. I wasn't agrivated at you for not updating/making a new story in so long. Life takes time. It was just amazing though. It was touhing, and put an insight on Allen's feelings when he lost his innocence. I think it yould be a wonderful idea of you made a one-shot companion piece to this one, from Tyki's view point though. Thanks again for the wonderful writing you do!

OMG~! that was written beautifully~! I love the way you went about writing it, and just your perspective on the scene was just so unique and beautiful. Words couldn't describe it. Keep on writing more stories like this~