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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseA great poem. You captured Lindsay's reaction to Danny being upset over Ruben dying very well. |
| ImaSupernaturalCSI 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseCaptured the moment very nicely. I know it was probably more important to focus on Danny and Rikki, but couldn't they have tossed in some DL somewhere?! Very nice, very sad piece to fit with the episode. Nice job. |
| lyss02 2007-12-16 ch 1, | abuseGreat Work. This poem was so sad, i could see this happening. |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this. Thank you. |
| dutchtreat 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem..."letting him breakdown"...so sad |
| CarolinaH.Manning 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseI wish she did. and I wish we could have seen it |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseaww wow that was soo good and sweet thank you soo much abbylover |
| mabelreid 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseYou said it all so well in just a few words. I loved the advice that Mac gave Lindsay to just tell him she wasn't very good at things like that. Your poem shows that she took that advice to heart and I loved it. Well done! |
| JESSMARY25 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I just wish we had seen her point of view on the show but then again that is why we have awesome fanfic writers like you that will bring many stories and poems inspired by a great episode. |
| Yemam2422 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! I don't come across very many poems in the fanfic I read so it was very refreshing. I especially liked the lines comparing Danny to Superman. Great work! |