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| Broken Amethyst 2008-04-24 ch 25, | abuseHello! Oh fun! Fagin's getting a job! How nice. Looking fowared to your next chapter. Cheerio=) |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-04-24 ch 24, | abuseHello! How sweet, I just loved that chapter too. Oliver and Leanne you have such a wonderful way of putting things together! Cheerio=) |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-04-24 ch 23, | abuseHello! I absolutly LOVE that chapter. I love the chapters that you have Bill and Linda in them and Oliver and Leanne. I love them all. Now to read the next chapter! Cheerio=) |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-04-24 ch 22, | abuseHello! Finally reviewing! Well great chapter, you did a wonderful job=) Cheerio=) |
| Brazeau 2008-03-11 ch 23, | abuseWonderful chapter! Thanks. |
| Seth Clearwater 2008-03-08 ch 22, | abuseHello! This was a neat chapter. One good reason why I like reading your chapters is because it's usually grammatically perfect and there are no silly spellng errors and whatnot. LOL Great chapter! Keep updating! Cheero |
| xBangs-McCoyx 2008-03-02 ch 21, | abuseWow, this is exciting! Really well done! |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-02-23 ch 21, | abuseHello! What a fun chapter. Yes, they've got Mrs. Dorris! Can't wait for the next. Cheero=D |
| Brazeau 2008-02-22 ch 21, | abuseAnother great chapter! Bill is my favourite character and it seems as though he has some trouble yet instore for him. Looking forward to reading more! Thanks. |
| Brazeau 2008-02-13 ch 20, | abuseEnjoying your story, it's wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more! Thanks. |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-02-13 ch 20, | abuseHello! Wonderfull chapter. Poor Mrs. McGlillian, but yah for Fagin and Dodger! No ergent need for a job now=) Can't wait till you get back to Oliver, Mr. Brownlow and Bet. Cheero=D |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-02-12 ch 19, | abuseHello! Yes that was a fun chapter! I can't wait till next=) You are doing such a great job. I really like how Bet is one of the mane charicters in your story. I always thought that she was quite interasting, but never knew that much about her. Cheero=D |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-02-12 ch 18, | abuseHello! Yes it is perfecly fine to have your characters based on the 1968 Oliver! It's your story after all! I really liked this chapter. I love Dodger, he is really cute. So is Leanne. Can't wait to read the next! Cheero=D |
| Broken Amethyst 2008-02-12 ch 17, | abuseHello! Please Elaine, Please, please forgive me for not reviewing. I'm really failing you I know. I really injoy reading the chapters I just put off reviewing, and then I think about it at the wrong times and then the computer crashed and we were without a computer for a week and so when we got it back and decided I really needed to review. (Poor excuis!) I loved this chapter. I will talk some more about it when I have time. Cheero=D |
| Seth Clearwater 2008-01-25 ch 18, | abuseWow! That was cute! I loced the manner in which you portrayed Mas McGillain's bubbly personality. I could really feel it! And the picture in the papers part was really neat. Good job! Cheero (: |