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Broken Amethyst
2008-04-24
ch 25,
abuseHello!

Oh fun! Fagin's getting a job! How nice.

Looking fowared to your next chapter.

Cheerio=)
Broken Amethyst
2008-04-24
ch 24,
abuseHello!

How sweet, I just loved that chapter too.

Oliver and Leanne you have such a wonderful way of putting things together!

Cheerio=)
Broken Amethyst
2008-04-24
ch 23,
abuseHello!

I absolutly LOVE that chapter. I love the chapters that you have Bill and Linda in them and Oliver and Leanne. I love them all.

Now to read the next chapter!

Cheerio=)
Broken Amethyst
2008-04-24
ch 22,
abuseHello!

Finally reviewing! Well great chapter, you did a wonderful job=)

Cheerio=)
Brazeau
2008-03-11
ch 23,
abuseWonderful chapter! Thanks.
Seth Clearwater
2008-03-08
ch 22,
abuseHello!

This was a neat chapter. One good reason why I like reading your chapters is because it's usually grammatically perfect and there are no silly spellng errors and whatnot. LOL

Great chapter!

Keep updating!

Cheero
xBangs-McCoyx
2008-03-02
ch 21,
abuseWow, this is exciting! Really well done!
Broken Amethyst
2008-02-23
ch 21,
abuseHello!

What a fun chapter. Yes, they've got Mrs. Dorris! Can't wait for the next.

Cheero=D
Brazeau
2008-02-22
ch 21,
abuseAnother great chapter! Bill is my favourite character and it seems as though he has some trouble yet instore for him. Looking forward to reading more! Thanks.
Brazeau
2008-02-13
ch 20,
abuseEnjoying your story, it's wonderfully written and I can't wait to read more! Thanks.
Broken Amethyst
2008-02-13
ch 20,
abuseHello!

Wonderfull chapter. Poor Mrs. McGlillian, but yah for Fagin and Dodger! No ergent need for a job now=)

Can't wait till you get back to Oliver, Mr. Brownlow and Bet.

Cheero=D
Broken Amethyst
2008-02-12
ch 19,
abuseHello!

Yes that was a fun chapter!

I can't wait till next=) You are doing such a great job.

I really like how Bet is one of the mane charicters in your story. I always thought that she was quite interasting, but never knew that much about her.

Cheero=D
Broken Amethyst
2008-02-12
ch 18,
abuseHello!

Yes it is perfecly fine to have your characters based on the 1968 Oliver! It's your story after all!

I really liked this chapter. I love Dodger, he is really cute. So is Leanne.

Can't wait to read the next!

Cheero=D
Broken Amethyst
2008-02-12
ch 17,
abuseHello!

Please Elaine, Please, please forgive me for not reviewing. I'm really failing you I know. I really injoy reading the chapters I just put off reviewing, and then I think about it at the wrong times and then the computer crashed and we were without a computer for a week and so when we got it back and decided I really needed to review. (Poor excuis!)

I loved this chapter. I will talk some more about it when I have time.

Cheero=D
Seth Clearwater
2008-01-25
ch 18,
abuseWow! That was cute! I loced the manner in which you portrayed Mas McGillain's bubbly personality. I could really feel it!

And the picture in the papers part was really neat. Good job!

Cheero (:
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