this is really good! I think you should continue.

Wow it was great. I just regret Michi didn't talk to Haruka directly at the end.

lmao, I love this story! Very nicely handled. That little speech is definately something I'd imagine Haruka saying, and I think the neighbors could hear me laughing. I'm curious about a second chapter, maybe the school's reactions to Haruka after this, but then again this is a really nice fic as a one-shot.

Excellent! That was definately the best damn origin story (for Haruka) that I've ever read! And thank you so much for the lack of rape and other abuse in it...

That was wonderfull!

I love this story, maybe you could write a sequel? please?

That was wonderfull!

I love this story, maybe you could write a sequel? please?

I really liked it! :)

Very good. Will there be a sequal?