I loved this story! Kind of wished the epilogue was longer oh well

Very entertaining and interesting storyline. I was surprised that Dr. Director and Shego didn't sue Dawn, but financial support for Kendra is important. :)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! :)

I liked this story as well, it had a different storyline to it and was interesting. It cool if you ever did a short follow up to this.

I've always hated biology so it was pretty easy for me to forget about the whole 'girl getting another girl pregnant' thing. Cool story :)

so...are we supposed to just take that a woman could get another woman pregnant just like that, cause I don't see a biological or even mystical explanation for it. And everyone seems to be taking it like it's normal for a woman to get pregnant by another woman. aside from that, cool story.

Great work.

Great work. Am surprised Shego isn't suing, Dawn.

Great work.

Great work.

Great work.

Okay... The ending was different. MJ. Lives!

Great work.

i think that you should write something during the time of Kim's college years. how Kim changed from 'an awkward straight to a player lesbian' with the help of Shego. i'm sure that something like that would be a big hit among your fans.

with that aside, did you really expect people to ignore the fact that two females cannot procreate? i mean, i like the story and all but it's just a little bit out there dont you think? anyway ill be enjoying the rest of this story and happy new years.

With lotsa fanboy glee,

Ernestt13.

good fic over all abit odd about a few things but still agood story

so says i THE NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL OF THE WORLD *strikes a dramtic pose*

y is no 1 askign HOW 2 women had a kid together?