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no 5/17/12 . chapter 11
I loved this story! Kind of wished the epilogue was longer oh well
diav 7/25/11 . chapter 11
Very entertaining and interesting storyline. I was surprised that Dr. Director and Shego didn't sue Dawn, but financial support for Kendra is important. :)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this! :)
aquarius127 4/25/11 . chapter 11
I liked this story as well, it had a different storyline to it and was interesting. It cool if you ever did a short follow up to this.
Etain Hawke 10/3/10 . chapter 11
I've always hated biology so it was pretty easy for me to forget about the whole 'girl getting another girl pregnant' thing. Cool story :)
Lazarian 3/26/10 . chapter 3
so...are we supposed to just take that a woman could get another woman pregnant just like that, cause I don't see a biological or even mystical explanation for it. And everyone seems to be taking it like it's normal for a woman to get pregnant by another woman. aside from that, cool story.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 11
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 10
Great work. Am surprised Shego isn't suing, Dawn.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 9
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 7
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 5
Great work.
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 2
Okay... The ending was different. MJ. Lives!
Itachi's aprentice 3/23/10 . chapter 1
Great work.
ErnestTheGuy 1/1/10 . chapter 3
i think that you should write something during the time of Kim's college years. how Kim changed from 'an awkward straight to a player lesbian' with the help of Shego. i'm sure that something like that would be a big hit among your fans.

with that aside, did you really expect people to ignore the fact that two females cannot procreate? i mean, i like the story and all but it's just a little bit out there dont you think? anyway ill be enjoying the rest of this story and happy new years.

With lotsa fanboy glee,

Ernestt13.
Aceina 9/7/09 . chapter 11
good fic over all abit odd about a few things but still agood story

so says i THE NUMBER 1 YURI FAN GIRL OF THE WORLD *strikes a dramtic pose*
Aceina 9/7/09 . chapter 3
y is no 1 askign HOW 2 women had a kid together?
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