I loved it!
I love lemons!
That's kind of weird though...
But oh well.
Lol.
Good one-shot!

that was exellent love keep writing stuff like that and eveyone will be fallin over lol. keep it up


xoxoxo

I'm a sucker for fluff! Lol.

:) so cute

Fits the song perfectly! Oh, and details are good. Who ever said there weren't?

Nice story, I hope you keep up the good work.

woah. that was the most awesome story ive read pertaining to music! that was so cool how the lyrics fit perfectly in with their motions. Kudos!! great story, and btw i liked the ending =]

I had the same impression the first time I heard Hot, I admitted is not my fav but the song is kinda catchy, so was your fic, you couldn't have -humble opinion- chose other better song it matches simply perfect
very good job, totally amazing n.n
Kakashi and Sakura lemoness yay!

This was really Good!! I usually don't like songfic's at all!! but I decided to read yours anyway because its about Kakashi and Sakura, and I ended up liking it alot!! Nice work! :) ^^

This is quite possibly one of the best song fics i've read, and i must say i was rather skeptical when i saw avril lavigne at the top of the page. in the end the persistance was well worth it, the verse and chorus all play to this particular scene well. I must heavily agree with ShipperTrish, because you are definatley one of the better examples of descriptive writing without being crass. It's almost amazing how seemingly perfect everything is worded. This deserves much praise, and no longer will i think "complicated" when i hear avril lavigne. It will be something much better (wink) Job well done and i look forward to your next work.

this is such a good songfic...

Hehe. You're welcome. ^_^ Yes, descriptions are a good thing because they make a story more real and alive and in the case of lemons, hot. Very, very...Hot. And considering how descriptive you were with this story...Yes, it is very, very...Hot.

Great job! ;-)