Oh poor Glitch don't give up you can win over the stubborn Tin Man. I of course am anxious to see how, where and when. DO NOT STOP Please.

Oh poor darling! Cain can be so cruel sometimes!

This is one my faves now. I think you captured both personalities extremely well. Awesome job :)

Hey, lazy!
What the hell, hmm? You think you can just get away with throwing this story out? Two chapters do NOT make a story. NO. You need to get to work on the third one, Usagi Youkai.

I'll be checking in.

This is very good, I look forward to more.

You said that positive feedback makes you want to update so here goes. I really, really like this fanfic so far. You are a very good writer and the plot for this is incredibly interesting. I feel so bad for poor little Glitch, I hope things get better for him. I cant wait to see where it goes from here, please update again.

He fits the image of a poet -nod- I feel so bad for him. Please continue?

Poor Glitch. All tings considered though, Cain's reaction is reasonbable. It makes the story more realistic, however heartbreaking it is to think of Glitch ever crying. Poor thing. It's too much for both of them.

Continue? I want to see what comes next!

O I LOVE THIS. Please continue as soon as possible cause I'll be waiting!
Mina

That was so good ^^ Sad, but very well written! Great job!!

Didn't like that whole "gimme a kiss and I'll eat" bargaining chip, since it took away from the true character of Cain (doubt he'd agree to that, or that Glitch would ask) and the angst of it all (which I always look forward to in stories), but it still wasn't bad. ^_^

aww I really love this story. I hope you continue on it.

aww thats sad

Please, please, please continue! It's very good and I have to know what happens. Why does Cain think being with Glitch would be wrong? Is it because of his wife or is he homophobic? I need to know! :)