 me 8/19/08 . chapter 9 what does he mean Jack will be killed very.. very soon... |
 ThePirate'sBride 1/17/08 . chapter 9Barbossa is a lying git! But anyway, great chapter! Keep it up :] |
 pebbles1234 1/16/08 . chapter 8Aww. Is he going to wonder how he is alive? Maybe ole' Jackie was too caught up in the moment to think of that. I like the strange tobacco product. It made me smile. I'm glad he forgave her. |
 ThePirate'sBride 1/15/08 . chapter 8All I could say while reading this chapter was "Oh my God!" because it's such a great chapter! So, does Jack now know that Elizabeth isn't his wife, or has he not remembered that yet? Can't wait for your update! Keep it up! |
 lina 1/15/08 . chapter 8 very good update soon. |
 beautiful-mistakez 1/14/08 . chapter 8Great chapter! |
 ThePirate'sBride 1/14/08 . chapter 7LOL! I found this chapter soo funny!
"Well, my apologizies, but I didn't know I had to ask permission to have something sexually-oriented with my wife." was by far the best line!
Keep it up! :] |
 pebbles1234 1/13/08 . chapter 7Cute! Ahh, clean Jack. I don't think I can imagine that! Haha. Very cute indeed! |
 pebbles1234 1/13/08 . chapter 6Oh, how incredibly sad. Poor faithful Will. I was wondering when the time was for this story of yours, and now I understand. Elizabeth is very funny drunk indeed. |
 Nisa93 1/13/08 . chapter 6OMG! that was hilarious! At least they got rid of Will... |
 beautiful-mistakez 1/13/08 . chapter 6LMAO poor Will.. NOT!
Love this chapter! |
 ThePirate'sBride 1/13/08 . chapter 6Hahaha, I couldn't stop laughing through that entire chapter, and as much as I hate Will I felt a bit sorry for him at the end. Keep up the good work! |
 ThePirate'sBride 1/12/08 . chapter 5This is getting even better, another great chapter! It's clever how with each chapter he's getting closer to remembering everything! Keep it up! |
 beautiful-mistakez 1/12/08 . chapter 5I want them kiss! update soon |
 Ditte3 1/11/08 . chapter 4I enjoyed reading little more soon. |