Reviews for Into The Summer Night

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Ash Phoenix 2008-09-03 ch 12,	abuseYeah, sometimes you can't help but wish that certain parts of the game would just disappear, right? :D Anyway, nice chapter, it makes me look forward to the next one. And, update whenever you can, okay? And, I totally understand: homeroom teachers = suck at jokes! XD Ash XX
Kaeghlighn 2008-09-03 ch 12,	abuseYAY! You updated! How long has it been? I haven't been keeping track of time. I'm very distracted by many many things but YOU UPDATED and that made my morning! Maybe my day if I survive going to seven fifty-three minute classes! =D I'm curious about MIDST, but I guess I'll just have to find out in time, eh? Thank you Banana Gun, you've officially made my morning. :3 Also, I hope you get through - well, everything - unscathed.
cerespallas 2008-09-02 ch 12,	abuseIt's so short =( but I'm glad you're continuing though ^ ^ I..um, don't have any comment about this chapter because I don't know what to think ;P Tomb of the Unknown King can be very hard to write, huh? I write something akin to FF8 AU as well but I took my time, I haven't even reach Laguna dream no.2. Maybe I'll get the same writer's block in fighting Brothers later... High school starts in many countries, huh? College term starts for me too... bad timing, considering I just mastered the art of procrastinating and waking up at 12 midday. So much for summer break XP Do you go to the same school you have on the middle school? I changed school every 1-2 years, even changing countries and using different national languages, it's kind of sad remembering how many people I left every time we moved out, I can't have the so-called childhood friends for that matter. Film like 'Smallville' makes me jealous :( Anyway, just take your time and update when you're in the mood! ^ ^
misikoblossom 2008-06-28 ch 10,	abuseOh, I've already reviewed Chapter 11, so I guess I'll have to stick with Chapter 10 for this one. As for your author's note...don't worry too much about reviews yet! :) As the story progresses, more reviews are definitely going to come; it just takes time as people discover the hidden gem. Okay, I'm getting cheesy again, but do update!
misikoblossom 2008-06-28 ch 11,	abuseI can't believe that you have only 11 reviews! This fic is AMAZING. First off, the length is just breathtaking. Seriously. Each chapter is long, lenghty, and just so /filling/. It's good. It's delicious. Great descriptions and plotline! I really can see the scene playing in front of me. Sometimes the dialogue is a bit sparse but it's quite realistic when the characters do speak. The conversations are not extremely witty or insanely fascinating - but that's not a weakness, but rather a strength. It merely makes the fic seem more real - just the normal conversations that people have. It tints the fic with an element of humanity (as cheesy as that sounds, it's true!). Let me admit something. Admittedly, the first thing I thought when I started this fic was "Mary Sue! Run!", but pressing on, I found myself not only sympathizing with Kira, but actually liking her. I do think that you have most of the characters' personalities down cold, although there is a little bit of OOC-ness here and there. But otherwise everybody seems to be in character, especially Squall. As for the plotline, well done, once again! There's a few similarities between this fic and "I Wanna Go Home!" in that both follow the plotline of FFVI, adding the characters, but yours is entirely unique in the sense that the original characters actually question Kira's presence, rather than miraculously integrate her character (ex Diablos!). Again, this makes the fic more realistic - and thus us readers can empathize more! Woah, hopefully this review hasn't gotten too rambly. But last (but not least!), I just wanted to talk about the whole Squall / Seifer issue. I'm rather torn at seeing Seifer "gone", but seeing that you've followed the official script, it's still well-executed. The scenes in the first few chapters with Seifer / Kira, to my surprise, actually worked. Not only that, but as a reader, I could actually feel the tension between the two. Just going on a rant here, but IMO it seems so far that Kira / Seifer have a lot more chemistry going on that Kira / Squall (if you plan to set them up)... plus Seifer is a lot more complex (tee hee, I never said anything about pairings! -cough-). Anyway, do update soon! again, well-done. Keep up the amazing work!
Ash Phoenix 2008-06-27 ch 11,	abuseOkay, I honestly hadn't read OMC (well, not all of it, anyway) but I've got to say that I really like your writing style and the development of Kira. And, I also like the various shifts between seriousness and light-heartedness in this fic. :) Although, I must say that Rinoa's "I think we took the wrong bus" cracked me up. Lolz, yeah ... that's me. Cracking up over the tiniest of things. :) Hope you update soon! Ash XX
cerespallas 2008-06-26 ch 11,	abuseHehehe, don't worry about hits number and reviews, they do that to me as well. I wonder; if they kept reading to the last chapter, why can't they leave a review? I'm not asking for their newborn, only a simple words so the authors feel appreciated with his/her writing and they're not even bothered to care. :P Whatta Lurkers... Flym and Diablos are flirting, huh? I like the bus scene :D And Kira is getting angstier ^ ^ Hmm, I'm sleep deprived as well due to assignments, so I can't find anything to comment... XO They're visiting Brothers next!! XO Ceres
Kaeghlighn 2008-06-26 ch 11,	abuseHomaguh... Got to say that I really love your writing ability and that I want it. First I'm giggling and then it's all serious and then something else makes me giggle again! Hehehe... I'm a giggle-box. Female version of Irvine; that's a funny thought. Haha, Kira's so punny! XD And sorry about your MP3. That sucks. I know several people who would die a little on the inside if that happened to them.
cerespallas 2008-06-22 ch 10,	abuseProfessor sounds stiff, I heard Instructor more than Professor for Trepe, but she won't even use that title anymore, so it's not a big deal :P Yeah, I always wonder how come Rinoa said Seifer sacrifice himself for Timber Owl? Did she REALLY know? So I think Irvine already knew who Squall's team was even before he met them, huh? And Squall... it will be pretty amusing for someone who was so anal retentive having Seifer's 'close friend' in his team.
KatandNeko-chan 2008-06-19 ch 9,	abuseVery interesting story. Caught the Kingdom Hearts reference, too.
cerespallas 2008-06-19 ch 9,	abuseHmm... To be honest, I like the previous one... (I just read it a day or so ago when you say this one's a rewritten of that) it seems more cheerful and lighthearted. This one is... more angsty... But whatever, I think I like this one too. Not as much as the previous one, but if you're not continuing that one, I'll waiting for this one then. Anyway, I always like ff8 rewritten, whether it's SI or just AU, so don't worry, I'll keep reading :)
Kaeghlighn 2008-06-18 ch 9,	abuseYou're a year younger than me... Oh, well! Who cares, right? Also, you're welcome, I like reviewing; it's fun and great to get a reply (plus a mention in the author's note!). Also, I love Flym and Irvine. They're very fun. I've found it very hard to not laugh when I read scenes like Kira and Flym conversing. So, seeing as I'm in class as I review, people might give me funny looks. :D Oh-oh-oh! I like the title "Apocalypse, Please"! I think it works well. Plus it makes me laugh a little on the inside. (P.S. It makes me sad when great authors don't have lots of reviews...)
Kaeghlighn 2008-06-17 ch 8,	abuseYAY! UPDATES ARE MADE OF WIN! I love these new chapters muchly, Tweenkle. I wish I had name ideas for you, but I can't think of any and they would probably suck. Anyway... Your story makes me giggle with glee!
Fuhrer Moogle 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, it definitely is different from OMC. But I'm looking forward to the rest of this rewrite and I think it'll be really good. :D
tolazytologin 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseFirst off let me say that you are an amazing writer for your age and second I think this story is starting on a really great ...uh, start. I remember reading One More Chance and I never gave a review cause I was always too lazy too =o ::le gasp:: But, now i'm not so, yeah. ... Can't wait for more! xD -tolazytolongin

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