Very cute story! I like how you portrayed Glitch into Ambrose- awesome work. And again, incredibly sweet story. Thank you for sharing! :)

“It’s all right if you love her, Ambrose.”
Naww...That's just awesome.
I would really like to compliment you on the way you made Ambrose slip seamlessly into Glitch again. He started out as Glitch, woke up as Ambrose, slipped slowly into Glitch and now he's a perfect mix of the two. And I can just picture them now, dancing together. Wow. This was so good. Also loved Cain's little 'is it Opposite day?' question. Nice characterization all round. :) Well done!!

Aw! I really, REALLY like your portrayal of Ambrose. I can actually SEE these two sitting the hospital, where as normally I find it a bit hard to picture him for some reason. But this characterisation it's beautiful. He seems so tender. Lovely work :)

oh my... wow... definitely going on my faves list. this is the first glitch/ambrose/DG fic i've read and I have to say it's amazing. you have so much talent as a writer, i hope you have a sequel? just an idea, but i know i'd definitely read it lol!

The scene where Glitch promises not to forget, I was like.. aw, poor Glitch... my eyes were seriously watering at that point... love it ^_^

~marauders-pride~

Twinkletoes!!1 I love it already!
But I would think Cain a little more understanding that a frightened confused Glitch would be found with Dg

YAY! BRAVO! That was absolutley incredible! You have an amazing writing talent, my friend!
I haven't been this giddy and overjoyed by a story let alone a NOVEL in a loong time!
GREAT WORK! :D
I'll definitley be checking out all of your stories!
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oh and by the way, "you couldn't scare a crow" made my day!
KUDOS!

Cute story! I really enjoyed reading it! You did a wonderful job with all the characters. Keep up the great work!

Good job. I'm not a big DG and Glitch fan. But, I enjoyed this very much. Well done!

I absolutely loved this fanfiction. I practically became addicted to it. I'm sad that it's over, but I really did like the ending. I'm a sucker for 'happily ever after.'
Thanks for such a great story, and I hope you write more!

SO CUTE! XD

I really love the way you brought everything around. Very nicely done!

*is playing with fluffy stuffs* Oh, wha...sorry! I loved this chapter, and I if you decide to write a sequel, please PM me! Thanks!

P.S. Great writing style!

Too much sugar and sweetness? Afraid you'll induce your readers into insulin response comas? ::giggles::

Don't worry. It's a very nice ending ::even though - no assassination attempts and such::

EVilGrin.

Very nice ending. I think you wrote it perfectly.

Also, never undermine your work at the end of a chapter. All artists hate their work. Let the critics tell you if they hate it - we don't (I don't, anyway). Fake it 'til you make it, baby!

~Innogen

aww! that was so cute! i loved it! lovely work!

Aw! This is a very amazing story that was very heart warming.

That was nice. Very good. LOL I loved the fact that he was hiding under her bed... too funny.