Wey! Loverly, to quote Eliza Doolittle. Nicely poetic.

Aw! I love how normal you make them seem! Like, a normal couple with thier own worries and fears. Please continue writing!

wow, soo beautiful. Love it, your style of writing is amazing and quite poetic. I love Lucissa.

Beautiful. This one is rather sweet and I really do like how you portray this pairing. The pace, style, atmosphere, and grammar were wonderful as well. Well done.