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Religion0
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
WE! KRALA! CHALA! WE! Ahum, aside from my insanity. As you might have guessed, I liked it quite a lot. I found a few spelling problems, so you should check it through.
crystalwolfberri
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
aww, this was soo romantic!! haha, she kissed him! YAY!! awesome story, thanks! =]
Poet Bucky
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
xD that is so awesome!

you did a lot better than I did with mine xD

you got everything perfect!

sheer awesomeness!

Bucky.
freakyanimegal
2007-12-14 . chapter 1
O.O
BWAHAHAHAH! That was PERFECT! Like right out of my own story! Except, I probably wouldn't have described as much...I need to work on that. n.n' Hehehehehe...oh Kral, you're gonna be Chala's little labrat? XD! Oh...Naggyass will have a fit. n.n

Me fav.
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