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Tonnerre
2009-09-16 . chapter 1
He makes it seem like everything's gonna be okay. That terrifies me more than his transformation.
Tonnerre
2009-07-30 . chapter 2
Hardcore. I hope to see more of this if only to figure out what becomes of them.
Tonnerre
2009-07-30 . chapter 3
Nice!
I didn't Know Blade was so important to things in the marvel Multiverse...man i'm behind.
Inkblade
2008-12-07 . chapter 1
Nice. Well done. Not perfect so keep working at it. Inspiring to me as a person who would perhaps write fanfiction. I hope you continue with this unless you're also busy with world peace and a cure for cancer.
Shann1
2008-02-03 . chapter 3
This is an excellent story so far. I really like your choice of team members to focus on (I'm a HUGE Kurt fan) and making Scott the leader of the bad guys...he makes a much better badass than goody two shoes.
Beaubier
2008-01-12 . chapter 3
I caught up! I love this fic! How many more exclamatory sentences can I shove into the beginning of this review?!

“Least I ain't the only one who's losing his damn mind over all this.”

No, he's not. I love, love, love the juxtaposition between Remy finding his faith and Kurt clinging desperately to his, first of all. Also, cheers for finding a cool way to use the concept that Kurt is "not entirely human." There are so many good ways to do it out here, and Marvel just can't manage. This is the best by far.

Your singular way with words is present throughout (Ex: "Emma's smile was as sweet as cotton candy and just about as substantial." HA! Awesome!), adding all kind of sugar and spice to a kickass plot. This is AU fic at its best, and I can't even tell you the number of match-ups I'm looking forward to. Scott v. Jean. Bobby v. Kurt. And oh, JP, what ARE you up to with your crazy magical blood?
drthmik
2008-01-02 . chapter 3
This is VERY interesting I liked that Northstar stayed human despite being turned (immagin northstar's spead and flight combined with a vampires strength and regeneration)
I had a thought that it would be interesting if ferals like Logan, Sabortooth and X23 were extra suseptible to becoming werewolves due to their animal natures
it would also be cool if Colossus was a werewolf (there is a lot of magic in his family) just think of a 500 pound organic steel wolf charging at you!
Darlin
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story. It's kind of like Marvel Zombies in a way, all twisted and fun, lots of characters I like/love and a lot of action plus you're updating at a good pace. Keep up the great work.
Darlin
2007-12-27 . chapter 2
Good chapter though the use of the word "weren't" was used a little oddly. Very good ending too, loved that.
Rogue151
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
Interesting concept, looking forward to more. I just wish you had more in each chapter.
webaholic
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
I don't normally care for vamp fiction but this is tremendous. PLEASE make time to post more; I am on the edge of my chair. Realistic human emotions and plot twists, wonderful pov skills, good sensory description.

MORE! MORE! MORE!

I don't suppose you are interested in an online critique group (selfishly suggested so I could read your work earlier than waiting for it to be posted ha ha)?
Syrinx Flute
2007-12-27 . chapter 3
Story is heating up! Woo, Bobby... can't guess what you're gonna do with him.
Spikey44
2007-12-26 . chapter 3
Hey, two more chapters, great! This is fun and you manage to keep it very much a vampire story but with a nice x-men twist. The Jean and Emma altercation was a nice touch and Storm is always more interesting with fangs. Please update soon.
Syrinx Flute
2007-12-24 . chapter 2
Bamf!

:D

BAMFBAMFBAMFBAMFBAMFBAMFBAMFBAMF!

Lovin' it! Guess Gambit does have the devil's own luck... lol! Update soon, please!
Darlin
2007-12-20 . chapter 1
An interesting story this, a little hard to follow, all the things going on in the past. Who’s the woman Scott’s waiting for, Jean? And who’s Ororo’s Arcadian prize – Remy? But I like the style of writing and it’s a good pace. I’m looking forward to reading more. Sorry I didn't log in but with the new system sometimes I wonder is it even worth it. *groan*
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