you killed her...sadistic women...got o church...just kidding, i like the way you i could write like that...try to write a more-than-one-chapter if you already have one, haven't seen it.

Well written. Very much in the vein of Mrs. Meyer (lol). The ending though makes it seem as though there should be something either way, well written, very good.

I love your Edward. You've got him right.

Thanks!

That really was incredible. I generally don't read Twilight fanfiction because it always seems a tad unrealistic, but this was one of the best I've seen. You kept everyone in character, and stayed true to Stephanie Meyer's writing style.

Bravo.

Wow.