Bravo. Very well done all round.

Wow. Just... wow. Chilling and believable portraits of all of them. I particularly liked Peter as Pan.

This is amazing. I love the way you fit the characters to the classic stories. Fantastic, fantastic job!

aw so sad and good loved it.

Gorgeous story! I love the symbolism of the fairy tales-I think the Rapunzel analogy was absolutely perfect.

Holy crap. This story felt like an acid trip (but I suppose dreams never make much sense?)

Great imagery though, and it was very creative.. Yay!

This is terrificly bizarre and yet oddly appealing at the same time. I like the mythic overtones, and the smooth movement from one setting to another. You characterized Molly quite well, and I enjoyed your overall style of writing as well. Thank you. :)

Radiant! I was completely captivated. So many details as earthy and visceral as they are mysterious.

Oh wow.. so very trippy. I love how you took everything from season 2 and metaphorically created this whole dreamscape. Molly is so brave here. A true hero!

"Because they care for no one but themselves, and they do not have the sense to miss anything if the world turns to ash while they thrive."

Such a Mohinder line...

Inspired placement of all the characters into all the stories you reference. I especially like West ("Boys are stupid" indeed, Molly) and Peter, not sure who he is exactly and afraid to find out.

Another good read. Thanks again!