So good it tugged at the heart strings.

Wow that is great...yes can see an argument like that happening between them,

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M Liking it Please update

Nice Bekki! I liked it. Especially since :eek: wasn't in it. :P

Bekki-that was awesome! You are a fantastic writer!

Very nice story. Looking forward to more.

very nice love the story

O- nice ending!

That was so in character for Jack. Good lead-in to 2010. Well done.

Wow, intense and very well in character for Sam and Jack. Great dialogue; the tension kept mounting until the ante was just too high - show or fold. They folded. Sad, but great capture of a hidden moment. More?

i feel so bad for jack

Very well written, Bekki. Lots of angst and emotion but I felt that you stayed true to Jack's character. Will you be continuing to 2010? (Isn't it hard to believe that the year 2010 is only 2 years away?)

Holy Cow! This was so needed to be written. I loved it and as always your Jack and Sam characterizations were spot on!

More please?