I love it I wish you would write more.

will you write the 3rd chapter ?
i see you didn't update since december ... should i keep waiting ? ^^' i'm a bit frustrated, here :s

I like your story so far =D Keep up the good work *Thumbs up*

I like it. I think you really have captured the characters correctly so far. :) I look forward to reading more of this story. Thank you for writing it.

o an angsty byakuya, love that, renji seems so cool! keep up the good work

Poor Bya... he really needs some consolance (or to get laid, by that matter).

And yay! Renji appeared at last! (I just realized that song was 'Standing to Defend You' when I read three lines of the song... XP). Renji's singing must be very sexy... ^_^

I'm curious at how you would develop these two's relationship~ update soon! ^_^

*Hira*

Whoa, this is good... Byakuya's feelings/sadness was potrayed beautifully. I felt sorry for him and ALMOST hoped that Hisana didn't die ('cuz the ByaRen won't happened that way... but don't get me wrong, I don't hate Hisana >.

cool you made a good story

D: i want renjixbya

good though

Wee! Angsty Byakuya is just too cute. I love this already. Hopefully we will hear some of Renji's thoughts, too?

We want more! ^^.