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| animechick 2005-07-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseupdthis story was really good |
| Queen Serenity 2005-05-24 ch 6,  | abuse*takes a deep breah, and brushes her hair from her eyes* Before I start this review, I must tell you something... I'm an honest reviewer, and, while some may take my reviews as offensive, they are not meant to be so... simply constructive, honest criticism. This story... there's not really anything I like about it. The characters seemed quite OOC, the plot didn't really seem though out, there were many spelling errors, and it was never really explained why Tuxedo Mask turned evil or how he possessed the senshi. I you were like... I dunno, 11 to 13 when you wrote this, I understand, but otherwise... I'd say this needs a massive rewrite, and you have should work on your writing skills. Again, I am truly sorry if this offends, 'cause it's not meant to. |
| Bunny Aino 2005-04-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou kept Usagi in character! However, you used the overused plot of betrayal. Please change it to where the inners were brainwashed by Dr. Gero! |
| Crystal Moon Magic 2003-11-23 ch 6, | abuseAW That's such a sweet ending! |
| firenze 2002-11-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis was so good! Thank you for writing it. |
| neoqueenserena84 2002-03-16 ch 6, | abuseThat was the best story that I ever read and I hope u have more stories that are just as good |
| ills 2002-02-27 ch 6, | abusei liked this story, really great. |
| Natali 2001-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis goes out to "Kuriky"----you don't don't know a good story when you hear one*you suck* |
| silvershadow8 2001-10-06 ch 1, | abusegood |
| Kay4 2001-09-23 ch 6, | abusei'm sorry but i did not like the storry it was too faerie taily |
| JLSCORPIO78 2001-09-21 ch 6, anon. | abuseTo bad it's over. But great! :):D |
| X Moonchik 2001-09-20 ch 6, | abuseI love the way you have ended this.It is a great story on my favs list. |
| JLSCORPIO78 2001-09-19 ch 5, anon. | abuseLove it. I like how u did this chapter with the scouts act as the past villians in this. More soon PLEASE! :D |
| aquafina rain 2001-09-19 ch 5, | abuseUh.... Bulma has powers???? Anyways, I like your story, write more!! |
| X Moonchik 2001-09-19 ch 5, | abuseThis gets better and better.I cant wait till the next part is up. |