Holy shit. So guess what? I knew I had read bits of this before and then when I tried to review 3 I coulsn't because there was a previous review! Wierdness. Anywho - so yes, enjoying the story muchly so far. Am slightly concerned considering it's been... a while since this was posted - so I'm not anticipating anything happening in the near or possibly far future, but it is a shame because I realy do want to know how the story moves from here to there :( Ohh - and did you ever get the Sora and Riku plushies?

Oh dear. Jealousy! Mind - who *wouldn't* be jealous of the kid who got to date Riku. Yummi! Esh - you really feel for Roxie- but at the same time he could have ... erm, handled things a little better. I'm still so sad over Sora!

Ho shit. ^^; Oh dear - poor SORA?!?!?!?! What the FUCK Roxie baby. Seriouslike. Ugh. He needs an axel to smack some sense into him. Frick. Sora :( Riku and Sora are cute though :) Kairi's much less hateable when she's on their side :)

Wow... EVIL ROXAS! Holy crap, you should update this soon too! O_O

i seriously hope u continue this story because i love it. I'm curious to see how roxas ended up killing sora. and i love the jealous roxas :P

NO Roxas is gonna kill Sora... crazy Roxas... couldn't they share happily lmao... love to see what's coming up! Update soon!!

*headdesks* This is.. painful to read. For all four chapters I was screaming "DON'T DO IT ROXAS!! I BELIEVE IN YOU!!" at my screen. And it's.. not.. working. (obviously.) *dies*

this...was fucking sexy.

I love everything about this story! mad jealous roxas is my OTL :'D

update SOON! PLEASE. This story is WICKED FUCKING AWESOME.

OMG PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I like this story very much ^ ^

Perhaps it'll never happen, but I wanna see Roxas steal Riku from Sora...

^/^

Oh my goodness! How... wow! :more blushes:

Poor,Sora,his so innocent.Oh please say Sora not dying here.He just too adorable,and how could you...Roxas,after all Sora did accept and treat you nicely?And how could you Riku?Trying and thinking having sex with both twins?What is his?Threesome?Sora is batter off with Speheroth then hmph! Or Leon! Or Cloud! Awed,hell,even Tidus is ok,but not that no good twistted Riku who now I think will(Soon anyway)Fuck his twins.No fair...why Sora why?Why are you so unlucky?Ebal author

I think actually reading this may hurt my heart.
He wants to shatter Sora/Riku! that alone makes me want to bop him rather hard. If situations were reveresed he very well could still be gazing at Riku with desperate eyes with Axel who likes him and then in Sora strolls and bam! even if he was with him... I duno... hmm.

But this Roxas gives me shudders slightly... all the things he thinks. And him feeling those sensations... twin thing? and Riku catching him in the act that made me smirk some lol :P glad to see more

I really like this story but I still think that Roxas needs to get grip an find someone else to call his own. Keep up the goos work and please update again soon.

Creepy! Oh geeze. It gives me shivers reading about all these cute little interactions and flirting and general awesomeness all the while knowing what's going ot end up happening :S I mean this makes you *want* to like Roxas, to feel bad for him and want him to be happy - but then you think back to the beginning and it is just incomprehensable how he could do such a thing to the boy who took him in! I mean he wants Riku, but he killed his love?! Holy geeze. Anywho, definately putting this on alert for when you post more :)